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Old 01-11-04, 10:58 AM   #1
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is ya structure really that important in a battle?
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Old 01-11-04, 12:27 PM   #2
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if your structre it always at opposite ends of the scale like this then yes!!!

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but if their isnt much different, then no

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it helps when reading also, an the point of your vere, is to make people to read it without tiring, an making it interesting, if your strucrture is every where then peeps are gonna thikn,

fuck that!!!!


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Old 01-14-04, 07:18 PM   #3
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Structure IS NOT very important, as DOS said if its all over the shit its not good, but if theres niot much diference its alright.
If it i structured better 95% of the time it will flow better ( unless the words don't rhyme )
This can be done by just shortening down the punches, and making them hard hitting but nice and short. If your not sure if it flows, actually speak the words out in a rap speed and see if it flows.
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Old 01-14-04, 08:52 PM   #4
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Structure Does matter in a battle, it is not the biggest catagory but if the punches were a tie it would decide the winner

Your lines should be about the same length, not to long though or they would be considered Streatched lines

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^ thats a good length line...give or take, that is basically perfect flow if all the lines rhyme

if you had lines like this:

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^ that would be considered streatched lines and it would cause bad flow, even though there the same length it throws off the flow because the lines are so long

Also....in structure dont use

~~~~~, // or Bold, Capitals, """"", ---, == or anything like that excesivly
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Old 01-14-04, 08:56 PM   #5
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answered and

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