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Valor 5 62.50%
l i n e . 3 37.50%
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Old 05-12-05, 02:50 PM   #31
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Old 05-12-05, 09:33 PM   #32
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upiin this .....damnit you lames...................
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Old 05-13-05, 09:31 PM   #33
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uppin number 4
its 2-2
cmon people vote this shit
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Old 05-15-05, 03:51 AM   #34
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uppin number 5....come on people vote vote vote.....get this closed
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Old 05-16-05, 10:10 PM   #35
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Old 05-17-05, 12:10 AM   #36
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Voted For: l i n e .

overal a really hot drop from both but my vote is gonna go to line on this one


i'm voting for line because his had more emotion in it and i think it really conveyed the ideals of the topic as a whole....also the vocab i thought was very fitting and flowed very smooth while valor's was very forced and choppyy... on a creative note i thought that the vocab added to the creativity of lines partially because valors was a little less complicated....

so overall valor up your vocab and good battle between the two of you but i think line had u at every angle....

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Old 05-17-05, 12:37 AM   #37
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[B]This was a dope battle, i was really feelin it , But i have to give this one to valor , he just came really good , and i was feeling his drop alittle more

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You had lots of imagery ,good emotions going into your peice..
your structure was good , made the reader want to read your verse... You had nice vocab and good wordplay,.... i loeved your worden ... Liked the refrence to when he talks to god... liked your peice alot...Keep it up

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Nice drop line dont get me wrong it just feel short in betting valor.. You had nice structure it was really on point...nice wordplay and vocab , i was really feelin it , you had nice imagery, and good emotions ,also nice feeling going into your drop.. i just felt valors verse alittle more... Keep it up

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Old 05-25-05, 02:10 AM   #38
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ok line dope drop good flow and vocab good imagery except i feel it jumped around a little too much here otherwise decent all throughout the drop emotion laced a little and that kinda hurt you but decent anyways 7/10
valor good drop here imagery was great and well thought out on this it was movie picture type shit on this good vocab and great emotion here made this a dope topical and edged out a win for you 8/10
i really think line couldve won this but he jumped around too much in his imagery and that hurt his picture overall..................
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Old 05-27-05, 01:26 AM   #39
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Line....you had a pretty nice verse...but the rhyming was forced in a lot of cases....seems like you through in words and phrases jus because they rhymed....I thought the middle part of your verse was the best....imagry was ok as was emotion..could be upped tho...

Valor...also a pretty nice verse....i thought you had real good emotion and ok imagry....internal rhyming was nicely done, but like Line...it seemed forced at times...othewise this was a sound piece

Valor wins with stronger emotion
 
 


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