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Old 11-12-06, 01:34 PM   #1
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Old 11-12-06, 11:57 PM   #2
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iight, beats coming in decent so far.....intros kinda bit long....

not feelin the hook...kinda sound like mugs from cypriss hill....

ur verse is a bit low...and quality kinda muffled....flows nice...kinda hard to hear what ur saying, but i like the message from what im hearing...hooks still ehhh....libs r nice here...lol slave ship line was kinda tupacish...delevery an't real strong...u should switch something up once in a while, cuz it seems repititivesomething to keep ppls attention nah mean?


not a bad track tho
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Old 11-15-06, 02:07 PM   #3
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intro needs to have something going on in it... or it doesn't work...


the hook is weak... just the way it was put together...


verse... a little low not a big deal... as far as content... it was pretty upfront and noticable... as well as abused by millions of people... not your fault it is what it is... I would rethink the hook basically... that's all... not a bad joint...
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Old 11-15-06, 02:30 PM   #4
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the hook is way to repetive but your flow is decent but you sound very mono toned... production is decent.. keep doing your thing.
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