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02-23-05, 11:06 PM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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Me and 20 GRAND HOTTEST OUT...
IP: BACC 8E92
wordness this track is pure fire........
ITS SOLDIER man.....HOT HOT HOT www.soundclick.com/20grand WORDNESS Links ----- http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1980441 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178000
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02-24-05, 12:57 AM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: BACC 8E92
what are u talking about
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02-24-05, 03:11 AM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: BACC 8E92
uppin for feedback
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02-24-05, 10:33 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: AB43 33B5
aight beat i'm feeling...
1st dude...flow was ok...need to work on breathe control...delivery was aight...clarity is off in some parts...lyrics were coo.... 2nd dude- first dude i like ya rap voice...flow was was pretty good...delivery was aight...lyrics were coo... chorus ehhh... overall this was an aight joint return the feedback http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178661
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02-24-05, 10:40 AM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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IP: 28BD 9D87
beat is okay
i like the lead in to the verse...good both verses are good... flows were on nice track...more energy would take it up a notch 1 |
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02-24-05, 12:50 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
it was a good beat & joint but there's no emotion & energy in this song tho it felt like u just did it just 2 say u put 1 togetha don't rush thru it take ur time & enjoy urself while puttin the music togetha
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02-24-05, 07:34 PM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: BACC 8E92
ok......thanks for the opinions and feedback..........
upppin
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02-24-05, 10:27 PM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: 13A4 AD49
damn all the uppss.... lol o.k...
Hook, sounds nice- quality isn't perfect, but its better than before  - your presence needs some help, but that comes with time, no way to really speed it up unless your out performing- I liked the first verse more than the second, just cuz 20 grands voice makes it tough for me... If you (20) could make your lyrics clearer I'd feel it more, but you just have this really low toned voice that melts into itself and it kinda bothers me personally- no hatred cuz your flow is cool- just needs polishing... stay up fellas, keep droppin and stay active.1EDIT: - its not your voice(20)... Its your energy-- JUMP AROUND... lol - foreal just upp ur energy a bit more on the track... (both)
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02-24-05, 11:42 PM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: BACC 8E92
word.....its still fire tho.....last night 10 downloads
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02-25-05, 12:13 AM
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You Cant Handle The Truth
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IP: 66F2 AB19
hook could be a lot better...words itself are kewl but don't like how you delivered 'em...
1st dude, lyrics cuold be better especially at the beginning, flow needs work... 20Grand, ya part right here should've been left out cuz there's no point in sipttin' just a few bars instead of 1st dude just making his longer...ya other verse iz aiight, but definetly not the best I've heard from you...you can do a lot better than this... not feelin' this cuz I know both ya'll can do bettah than this...stay up though kydz...
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