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SevenThird 1 16.67%
ATMOSPHERE 5 83.33%
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Old 05-17-04, 06:41 PM   #16
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this was a very close match but atmosphere ended up with the win u guys both stayed on topic but atmosphere had a nice flow and wordplay and sventhird couldnt compare vote - atmosphere
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Old 05-17-04, 07:33 PM   #17
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atmosphere-your verse was okay......your imagery could ahve been better....your structure was was good.....flow was onpoin......overall good verse man17/20


Seven-your verse was alright.........your imagery could use some work just like atmos......your structure i wasnt really feeling.....his was better wunc he edited it......you just need to work on your vocab and imagery and you should do good16.5/20

v/atmos but jus barly


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Old 05-17-04, 08:00 PM   #18
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atmoshpere:
u had great flow an word play (this won you the battle)
bestline in topical:
while sniping the cop got shot in the leg by a jail guard//
got up and started to run but realized i was back in the jail yard//
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seventhird
stayed on topic good
worse flow and wordplay so in my oppinion you lost
overall *5*
work on evrything
kepp workin peace
keep elevatin and stay pimp
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Old 05-18-04, 11:09 PM   #19
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iight this is the break down i felt that atmo came a lil better the shit that shit dropped was funny and the other nigga mad me wanna stop reading at line 1his lines wernet that good welll...ill just say that they was wack this line had me lol the hardesr from atmo


while sniping the cop got shot in the leg by a jail guard//
got up and started to run but realized i was back in the jail yard//

^^line pretty much gives him/her the vote

enuff said.....
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Old 05-20-04, 02:14 AM   #20
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Uppin for more votes...... Will return the favor...
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Old 05-20-04, 11:30 AM   #21
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Iight im gonna have to say Atmo won this 1 he had some alright punches and ok structure.......seven could of i think beat him if he had changed a few words in the verse

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