aiight ten lines.. how bout we both post in 30 minutes whoever doesnt post within 30 minutes of checkin in will be branded a no show and DQ'd

by the way this is not my check in.. peace

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aight... this is counted as my check in... CHECKING IN........................

Hey, It Could Be 'Worse Though'/
And Listen, I Wouldnt Be Callin You "SON" If Ur Momz Had Taken Her 'Birth Control// prolly my best line...
When i get hard wit rhymes i shine like lip gloss/
u pissed off cause ya dick small so the condom slipped off//
fuck ya verse u can’t even bite off mine/
Just Call Me An Operator, Tha Way I Gotcha Life On The Line//
Ive thought about it and ive come to the conclusion/
that imma kill so bad he gonna need a blood transfusion//
fuck around and my lyrics will seperate ur interior frum ur exterior jus ta show u who has tha superior motivation/
my lyrics act as if they were poisen, come in contact, get ur skin attacked, and tha result is ur coloration seperated frum ur skin fabrication//

ehh... this was terrible.. very, very terrible, but im getting back from a big slump, so... p'z

yo check

limitz will never make his MIND DEFEAT THIS,
cuz when my RHYME RELEASES
his weak lyrics get shattered into a thousand TINY PIECES
i mean i might ass well leave your RAPS KILLED
cuz the FACTS STILL that you LACK SKILLS
your intelligence does not exist like CRACK PILLS
so this battle you CANT WINNIT
your just a TRAMP GIMMICK
your fuck rhymes filled with more stretch lines than fat CAMP CLINICS

fuck!!!

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damn... nice closer, prolly got me... well, im uppin this bizzatch for the first-time... uppin #1

lol.. yeah i dont know man well have to see what the voters go with.. peace.............................

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damn vote on this mothafuckas we got a new voting reward system or what wtf?.. .................................................. .................................................. ......

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yea... wtf? this is my second time uppin this battle, come on peeps, vote...

Yo I cannot poll vote, but I want to up my post count so that someday I can.


Meh. Rhyme's a bit off, the punch isn't that original, for being your best line, it's not a great one.

hm... iight...

multis off, i understand what your goin for, but it doesn't really connect

heh, just thought, if he's really killed a blood transfusion would do nothin...

STrectched out! The punch here isn't that hard hittin either, man. . . Gotta come with those punches, I dont' know what else to tell ya, you got some good ideas just need to word them better. keep risin up.

now for

good multis, not that hard of a punch but alright

multis again. The last line ain't hittin, though.

ha, nice.



overall, takes this for better punches, multis, a more entertaining verse overall.

wow...

do i smell biter.. *sniff sniff* Limitz naughty naughty!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=88398

Posted By Jamaal

Hey, It Coulda Been 'Worse Though' - And Listen, I Wouldnt Be Callin You "SON" If Ur Momz Had Taken Her 'Birth Control'!!// ouchhhhhhh

Posted By Limitz

Hey, It Could Be 'Worse Though'/
And Listen, I Wouldnt Be Callin You "SON" If Ur Momz Had Taken Her 'Birth Control//

Ha...ill be reporting this to IR

Bye Bye Limitz...

word here it is... takes this i seen him drop better but really he didn't need much he threw like 2 solid punches adn that was enough to take this....Limitz don't talk about yourself so much its all good but your in a battle not a track on a CD attack at all times....i shine like lip gloss....<----- leave it out next time.... good drop work on your caps....and by that i mean don't do em people can figure out what ryhmes that will be a huge factor if you battle in elevated ever peace........

damn... i guess i win this by dq then.............................................. .................................................. ....................

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damnit... this sucks, well, peace guys... and i didnt bite, but it looks like i did, peace-out

shit.. yo.. man its funny how i can post my wackest shit and still get votes

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