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Dedd Sirius 0 0%
FlOw InTeLLiGeNt 5 100.00%
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Old 06-14-04, 12:43 PM   #1
FlowIntelligent.
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FlOw InTeLLiGeNt Vs. Dedd Sirius

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aiight heres the rules:

10 lines min
16 lines max
no crew votes
no hate votes
no d/r votes
blind spit...no feedin off other persons verse
first to 5 votes wins
3-0 is KO
100 posts to vote
check in due within 12 hours
verses due within 24 hours after check in

THIS is NOT my CHECK in

check in and agree to rules


Win by KO
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Old 06-14-04, 02:21 PM   #2
Dedd Sirius
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can i get 8 lines minimum? i'll probably hit ten, but 8 might be just perfect....
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Old 06-14-04, 02:38 PM   #3
FlowIntelligent.
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ya 8-16 dont matter...but it would help if you did more lines im not a noob so you'll need more
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Old 06-14-04, 03:10 PM   #4
Dedd Sirius
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aight, cool. checkin in and ima start putting suttin together....
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Old 06-14-04, 10:26 PM   #5
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checkin in my verse'll be up within 24 hours ~!1!~
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Old 06-15-04, 10:10 AM   #6
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you got 5 hours to drop ya verse dedd jus letting you know
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Old 06-15-04, 10:10 AM   #7
Dedd Sirius
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aight, that's a tight deadline, but that seems to be my way of life.........
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Old 06-15-04, 01:28 PM   #8
Dedd Sirius
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flow intelligent hot for pachyderms the way he blowin elephants//
verbal bellyflops couldn't elevate so now you've grown irrelevant//

you up on more booty than fag bukkaneers, ima frag this musketeer//
put a paper bag ova s'plastic head and shag 'im like he's queer//

you only battle guys except for a harlot on one occasion*//
like zorro, the gay blade, you lackin one half of the sex equation**//

i'm smackin this fairy with a quick spit from a blackberry***//
i'm even more retarded than special kids with dads named "Jerry"****//

you takin direct hits so you can't come with correct spit//
you worse than student presidents the way you elect shit//

leavin more stank up in ya cranium than half-size ziplocs//
titanium, I retard you like fat road crews up in in gridlock//

itz like evander on nitrous, these fundamental rap skillz impactin ya dentalz//
my mentals is in-extractible with more multiples than time share rentalz//

ya better find somethin ta stiffen up ya game like blue pills or corn starch//
cause ya only chance to win this is with d/r votes from porn stars*****//

*he battled the mental chick, but usually he don't battle chicks. says he "battles guys all the time". http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...090#post1342090

**wasn't zorro gay or something???

***i do this shit on my blackberry PDA on the subway

****"Jerry's Kids" is/was a charity for retarded kids founded by Jerry Lewis old comedian

*****that mental chick posts her gazongas on the net, and he claims everyone gets d/r votes absolutely http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...732#post1345732
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Old 06-15-04, 01:54 PM   #9
Induelz
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I woulda voted. But it looks like ya opp didnt even post,
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Old 06-15-04, 01:59 PM   #10
Dedd Sirius
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he's still got a few hours to post verse in reply...
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Old 06-15-04, 08:38 PM   #11
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lol.....who is mental....i only battled one gurl idiot disasterpiece420...so stop makin fake personals..
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Old 06-15-04, 11:17 PM   #12
Dedd Sirius
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disaster piece IS who i was referrin to, she's kinda mental, kinda crazy. i just coulnd't remember her name.

nah, i'm takin this battle seriously since you got a way better record, no fake shyte up in this...
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Old 06-16-04, 12:15 AM   #13
FlowIntelligent.
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aiight heres my verse

~~jus gettin started~~

dedd is that ya real verse or i should i pop ya writtens...stop and listen
drop ya bitchin...dont got a pot to piss in when i start to chop ya disses

~~time to get serious~~

im neva slippin on rooks..lyrics is my recipe..like im cuttin up cooks
2 lines could beat you..cuz ya "lines stink" like you "shitted on books"
better pray that you shine..yea u own ya life..but today kidd its mine
and like "beginners coloring"..dont step to me..learn to "stay in ya lines"
my lyrics shock randomly like lightning..you wanna win? try biting
beatin me? unlikely..I'll leave u with more CAPS THAN MY TYPING
flow intelligent's neglectin this youth...all my wins are consecutive too
in this battle dedd dont expect a "tie" unless i merk you in a executive's suit
my rhymes is helpful...you cant touch my level...here i'll make it clearer
the only time you battlin weak MC's...is when you spittin at a mirror
u got burned tonight..yurned to fight..u sayin you earned ya hype?
well ya "streaks jus been stopped" like you just "learned to wipe"

~~finisher~~

dont look past this myth..im'ma trash this bitch..watch me blast this kid
stop trying to explain ya verse..shit jus battlin me puts ya ass at risk

~!1!~
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Old 06-16-04, 12:43 AM   #14
KillaCamFlow
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Iight let me keep this real.....dedd won.....LoL IM PLAYING.....flow murderd you fam...ya.....need to elevate some.....flow was good in flow....struc...wordplay....and puncheslines....dedd u came ok in wordplay and flow...ya rhyme was kinda basic tho..ya need to make it more complex...next time ..make it more better and make the punch lines hit hared.....O.K battle

Vote/....Flow

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Old 06-16-04, 01:28 AM   #15
LaTiNKiTTeN
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flow intelligent hot for pachyderms the way he blowin elephants//
verbal bellyflops couldn't elevate so now you've grown irrelevant//
HMM...NOTHIN HARD HITTING THERE JUST MULTIES N OK FLOW

you up on more booty than fag bukkaneers, ima frag this musketeer//
put a paper bag ova s'plastic head and shag 'im like he's queer//
U'D SHAG A QUEER IF HE HAD A PAPER BAG ON? I'M KINDA CONFUSED..I DONT LIKE THIS...

you only battle guys except for a harlot on one occasion*//
like zorro, the gay blade, you lackin one half of the sex equation**//
DONT LIKE IT

i'm smackin this fairy with a quick spit from a blackberry***//
i'm even more retarded than special kids with dads named "Jerry"****//
GAY

you takin direct hits so you can't come with correct spit//
you worse than student presidents the way you elect shit//
DOESNT EVEN MAKE SENSE....

leavin more stank up in ya cranium than half-size ziplocs//
titanium, I retard you like fat road crews up in in gridlock//
HUH?

itz like evander on nitrous, these fundamental rap skillz impactin ya dentalz//
my mentals is in-extractible with more multiples than time share rentalz//
HUH AGAIN?

ya better find somethin ta stiffen up ya game like blue pills or corn starch//
cause ya only chance to win this is with d/r votes from porn stars*****//
WEAK....N PLAYED.....






~~jus gettin started~~

dedd is that ya real verse or i should i pop ya writtens...stop and listen
drop ya bitchin...dont got a pot to piss in when i start to chop ya disses
THIS PART IS WEAK...JUST MULTIES.....

~~time to get serious~~

im neva slippin on rooks..lyrics is my recipe..like im cuttin up cooks
2 lines could beat you..cuz ya "lines stink" like you "shitted on books"
THIS WAS AN OK PUNCH..SET UP WAS KINDA GAY
better pray that you shine..yea u own ya life..but today kidd its mine
and like "beginners coloring"..dont step to me..learn to "stay in ya lines"
KEEP U IN LINE IS THE CORRECT PHRASE I THINK...BUT THIS WAS STRAIGHT.....
my lyrics shock randomly like lightning..you wanna win? try biting
beatin me? unlikely..I'll leave u with more CAPS THAN MY TYPING
WELL,THE CAPS CONCEPT HAS BEEN USED....ITS OK..
flow intelligent's neglectin this youth...all my wins are consecutive too
in this battle dedd dont expect a "tie" unless i merk you in a executive's suit
THIS IS UR BEST PUNCH,I LIKE IT...
my rhymes is helpful...you cant touch my level...here i'll make it clearer
the only time you battlin weak MC's...is when you spittin at a mirror
WELL THE CONCENPT HAS BEEN USED....MAYBE NOT WORDED EXACTLY LIKE THIS.....
u got burned tonight..yurned to fight..u sayin you earned ya hype?
well ya "streaks jus been stopped" like you just "learned to wipe"
U SHOULD'VE SAID WINNING STREAK...BUT IT WAS STRAIGHT....

~~finisher~~

dont look past this myth..im'ma trash this bitch..watch me blast this kid
stop trying to explain ya verse..shit jus battlin me puts ya ass at risk
UR FINISHER N CLOSER WERE GAY......THE MIDDLE SECTION WAS PRETTY STRAIGHT..THE BEST VERSE I'VE SEEN FROM U....U ACTUALLY HAD PUNCHES IN EVERY BAR..........I THINK U GOT BETTER....THE TIE LINE WAS THE BEST IN THIS WHOLE BATTLE U WIN HANDS DOWN......
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