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04-22-07, 05:52 PM
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The Write Weight
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Mr. Write (1-0) vs Lampejo (1-0)
IP: EF6E DF27
Write Away Your Thoughts Week 3 Mr. Write vs Lampejo Ok, this week, we have started a Champ and Contender match. Those of you who are not in the champ or contender match, prove yourselves worthy and work your way up. Remember, the prize is 100 dollars, and there are some other prizes as well. If you no-show, you will be booted, from now on that is the rule. Invite your friends as well, help expand our league. Don't leave all the work for the mods to do, we really need your help too! Well, good luck this week guys, keep up the tempo, and outwrite your opponent! This will be the only free verse week you got, so make it good! (Free verse week, write what you want, any topic, just write.) Rules Good Luck! |
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04-23-07, 11:37 AM
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Above Originality
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IP: 9465 0DDF
Blah...
EZ shit here man..lol! i shall show you led poetic how poetry shall overcome
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04-23-07, 11:54 AM
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IP: 4A0F A487
Damn you john
what up write but word good shit with the free verse week.
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04-23-07, 12:50 PM
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Above Originality
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IP: 9465 0DDF
You’re Killing My Conscience My mind bleeds within, cant breath again My thoughts start to wind DOWN... With immortal sin Now let’s begin… The cold shoulders get FROZEN In time of space, as ANGER sits in as its potion Floating above all, these thoughts get pressured The eyes deceive the brain to release a bad lecture Textures of the thought sink a burden design Leaving a murderous thought that paints with a white outline Drool drips for taste of happiness again… My thoughts bend to a certain extent leaving my emotions bent Tropical Stormed Fallacies breeze on through Mirror Reflected actions pace me to think of only you Tears turn to acid; these acid drops burn my cheeks Breaking me down from seconds to hours to days to weeks Obsolete my emotions scream, MURDERING me incomplete Trying to stay afloat the madness, yet I’m still swept off my feet PIT… …PAT PIT… …PAT The water drips slow, matching my saliva Joking with my mentality, trying my best to be a survivor Telling myself, I’m better than this… I could do more Than raping my skin with sharp blades, my arm isn’t a WHORE! I feel my heart was catapulted to spikes of death The screams of terror burden my ears to go def. Stop fucking screaming… seriously what the fuck… I was by myself and the only one shrieking cries was me, dumb luck What is wrong with me…? I keep quavering... I keep shaking It’s like the thought of such guilt and pain is so breathtaking The Pain has now become so soothing… muscles are loose Duck, duck goose… The tip of the blade plays to spill blood paper; noose Withered down from all this excitement, my smile grows big I feel like a pig, rolling in the mud of disparity, the unhealthy pit. Shredding my appearance piece by piece, I have become naked Call me the bare truth and witness the very first act of hatred “My life; to good to live for so I ramble these words for you to face it Fake shit… fakes laugh and face lift with shit so basic This be the bitter truth, no good?... my emotions are tasteless. Ace of aces; I grow behind egos, call me faceless My words twist people’s thoughts and crush them; wasted.” I have expressed my shape shift… ….. for the brief moment in time To reply the thoughts of others… asking the question why? I leave a note under the bed covers for others to read They all did a good deed the bad seed was me So I met my match, in a battle between me myself and I The window opened a opportunity, that led me to fly Till the clouds turned red, and the rain became hail Skinning me to death… food for thought; for sale. *Rehab Center in California Jason Wallace a alcoholic recovers from his 4 year addiction and now owns his own business and lives a happy life with wife Bernice and kids jahton and baila Wallace. . . . . Mind over matter Silhouettes carve me deep. Shading me darker than The shadows behind me Beautiful decorations, collage Of creative images of you and me Depending on well… -what season of the year it was So hide behind smiles I can play the same game as well But if any one asks were playing hide and seek Obscure measures abruptly Ascend from the ground up As gravity takes over our sole Atmosphere in life we live. ^^ Triple A accomplishment -yet you not notice anything from me. I am always left in willows of pain and remorse Not for you but for myself Staying, even though I should go. Tears bait my emotion to finally Give into this massacre, These painted face lifts arouse with laughter Cause once again I have lost In the time of shining. Such emotion is amiss and a mystery Towards how I was rewarded. A bliss moment stripped For the simple fact That my heart lies deep within The ocean lying next to the abyssal *Months after his rehab success his wife cheated on him and he commited suicide as he lost everything from his job, kids, and life cus of his breakdown
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-Chalkin' Up Your Future Last edited by Mr.Write : 04-23-07 at 01:06 PM. |
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04-27-07, 10:07 AM
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Above Originality
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IP: 9465 0DDF
Write wins
Write (1-0) Lampejo (1-1)
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-Chalkin' Up Your Future |
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