ight peep HOLD IT DOWN...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/20grand.htm


This is a dope track im really feeln dis one.

LINKS:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=176171
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175907

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

*Listenin*

nice intro

love this beat

lyrics are nice, flow is flawless and i like ya voice on this one, abit softer than that gangsta approach n it suits this song well, presence is dope as usual one of ya main qualities

very gud track, cud av been longer though

8/10

keep em comin

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jea i kept it short cuz im workn on a few other longer tracks at the moment, thnx for the feed mayne

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

dunno wat to say but dope dope hahaha
nice beat, im feelin it
flow is on point/fuckin insane lol
emotion is there also, i like the mic presence
no flaws really after listenin once
overall this is pretty dope, i like it
keep droppin!!

Return the Favor:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=176316

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jea holla back, UPPN DISSS dopeness

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

i know yall peepn dis, UPPN come on

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

listenin:
Beat:good beat,i heard this before but dont remember when and where
Flow:nice pretty nice
Intro:Pretty Cool I Like It
Intonation:yah koool kool
imma be download this for sure

UPPPN AGAIN holla back

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

more feed plz COME ON! jea

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

peeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

Listenin'...

Nice quality, nice beat...your voice is softer...nice flow, very good, flawless...lyrics are good...nice track man, keep up the good work...peep my newest, link in sig.

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my nig, what up. peepin, alchemist, hold me down i love this beat, cop his cd first infantry. but yea, to tha song, pretty nice, quality sounds not as good on this one, it might just be cuz i listened it lo fi tho. did seem pretty short, u always come good so i didnt see anything that set this one over the top for ur normal but def above tha rest u know how we do lol. ur voice sounds different on this, makes ur personality seem more from the heart i like it stick widdit. pretty good drop. but yea 20, when r u gonna finish ur other 8 bars on our track? i been waitin a minute for that. get at me on AIM cuz that is ready for release.holla

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best Audio Head May- the Omen*

OMEN ON MYSPACE

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Typing as I listen:

Intro sounded like you recorded it underwater - must be using a shit mic liek a computer mic. Vocals are woned by that cheap mic man - a better quality mic would work wonders with your vocal range. Lyrics are on point, the echo on the track wasn't overdone which is rare as shit on the net. Ad libs weren't over-done either. Definite plus there. Rhymescheme is still stiff - no diversity (cadence) to it really which is a letdown seeing the other strong points.

I'd say to get a mic man - even a radioshack performance mic. Work real good in your VR then put some cadence in your vocals - meaning, spit it more liek you speak. Naturally (which is where everybody's getting this "comfortable on the mic" thing) you don't speak in the same monotone style that you rap in. If you could shake that, you'd be a marketable sound IMO.

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actually i have a good mic, 50 bucks.... lol
atr-30 autiotechna,

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs