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Expired battle close - win

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GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-05 02:14 PM.

Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head...
Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"...
When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib...
Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid...
All you conduct is weak rhymes your gonna lose this competition...
Natural Killda come up with shorted-out bars like an electrician...
Startin' to get old your raps repeat like listenin' to a Furby...
Killa's bars are fallin' apart like cars in a Demolition Derby...
"Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord...
My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED"...

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Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-05 03:16 PM.

Just happenin' to get worse,cuz all your doing is babbling words,
ya' got 49 wins...but too bad those all came from battling herbs
A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice,
Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice
Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee,
Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME
& again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?,
Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED
So Just quit,you can't contest..with anyone,not even with the worst,
And if your shit's ever dope,then we know u've just bit a' verse

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Voted For: GKillaz05

opener: NK's was a bit of a played line, good but a little played wen u compare it 2 G's. -Nice wordplay and metaphor in a hard-hitting punch. very amusing too.

closer: NK's was really good but again wen u compare it 2 G's its a little played. GKillaz' was original, funny as hell with good wordplay and metphor use, overall a really nice closer.

Overall: NK had a great flow which made it really easy to follow and it was packed with personals and heavy punches.
"A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice,
Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice"
-I paricularly liked this bar. It summed up the whole verse really. Lots of personals but nothing very original and/or exciting

GKillaz had concepts i aint ever seen before, the metaphor use with wordplay all the way thru was on aanother level. As i read the verses for the second and third time each i really see it even more.
"When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib...
Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid..."
-This bar was great and again it summed up the whole verse showing how intelligent and funny as heel some of the bars were.

Nice verses both of ya but GKillaz takes it

rtf pls

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Voted For: GKillaz05

Overall:
GKillaz, IMO had slightly edged out NaturalKillah with a better overall better flow, better punches, opener and closer. RE personals, both did a good job a jabbing the other....overall i think this was a tight one, once again Gkillah brought more to the table on this one....

good battle on both parts...

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G'z best lines:
Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head...
Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"..

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NK's Best Lines:
& again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?,
Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED

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