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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

Voted For: ••••Dice••••

Allow me to introduce myself Squad I am your conscience,
WTF we do’n here? Ya know Dice is nice with the phonics,
- nice multi here, and a solid punch to start off

Us in a battle please...it’s just nonsense,
Look fool!!! We can’t even spell Eboniks,
- kinda weak, not really feel'n this, seems like a filler to me, rhyming for the sake of rhyming

Put us in the spotlight ‘n’ now I gotta try to save this case…
Fuk let’s just do what we did last time, (bite to save some face)…
-Took this battle and really twisted it here, don't be surprised if you lose a few people here. I understand where your going with it, and cause I do, I like it. It's punch in itself

Ya know them kids is kidding they say you got some skill,
I know losses are tough to swallow, but here…take the pill.
- See another multi here, and the punch is funny and creative good solid punch


It's no joke don’t get me wrong, but ya heart’n’head wanted me to pass this note along
“WTF? YOU DEAF? THAT FAT BITCH IS SING’N YOUR SONG”
Not try’n to sound cold, but when have we came up with one good punch?
-ssssssstttreeeetttcccched bar, need to cut out the filler words, this could have been a hard hitting punch and still was cause of the creativness of it, it was a nice approach but missed full impact.

Call it a hunch, but I’m think’n we stay-in-school, c’mon, let’s go pack your lunch.

-this was easily your best punch of the battle, the whole "stay in school" concept was nice, strong finish to an average to below average battle.





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shit, sry, by mistake i hit enter, here's teh rest of the break down.


chea, yo imagine me losin, gettin juked by a crook
nah,u can almost measure this gay, callhim fruit by thefoot
-fuk'n great line, nice flow wasn' t stretched,

ya spirit crushed, it b trampled n solemn
if u bet u could win, then i guess u got a gamblin problem
-this was a an average bar, don't be surprised if some of the people that vote on this don 't understand "solemn" probably should have clerified it at the bottom,

can't believe the mouthin on this fool, i b doubtin on this dude
he got a dickridin calculator, cuz he countin on his crew
"mouthin on this fool" this is where your sentance structure started to weaken, should have tried to keep it simple.

and now that I see it, i dont' see a crew either, never been a fan of fake personals.

Dice, u small to me, you aint nothin large
rough sex wit his rhymebook, only time ya bars was FUCKIN HARD
-filler verse, not a big problem other guy had one as well, but yea this is played, try not to put shit down and the average joe, can think of.

a trusty lesson, when i swing wit this rusty weapon
his wins plus losses is only way dice gets Lucky 7
- not 2 sure bout the first bar cause i kinda took it as your the "rusty weapon" but you definetly made up for it with the second line in the bar, very creative, nice personal.

im not kind, and im no benign in fact
i say fuck playin wit dice, cuz his rhymes is CRAPS....EASSSY
-kinda a weak personal, i probably would have put that last bar as yoru last one, cause it was so strong.


Basically I gave this one to Dice, by a hair, mainly cause of creativity, but I'd expect this to go down to the wire.

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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

+++++++++uppin good battle dice+++++++++++

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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

+++++++++uppin good battle dice++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

Voted For: SQUAD-UP

my vote goes to SQUAD-UP...he ahd better multies and punches and i jus liked the flow better...Dice all ur stuff was 1-syllable rhymes, work on some multies and i think u'll improve

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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

Voted For: SQUAD-UP

Squad up got this...my breakdown....
Multi's-Squad up
structure-Squad up
punchez-squad up
topical-dice
best lines..the ones that took it all..."ya spirit crushed, it b trampled n solemn
if u bet u could win, then i guess u got a gamblin problem
can't believe the mouthin on this fool, i b doubtin on this dude
he got a dickridin calculator, cuz he countin on his crew"

Hah!!!..that was nice....

dice
you came wit a topical,but It was cool...still lacked any punch.
I think you are in the wrong battle...cuz if it was a topical then you would of had a slight chance,but he just came wit sum good punchez...an you fell short on delievery...no hatin just my vote!

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Voted For: SQUAD-UP

i would have to say squad took this jawn right here. he had thos punches and a nice flow even tho some punches were overused n shit. but dice didnt really have alot of hard disses or punches htat attacked the opponent.


chea, yo imagine me losin, gettin juked by a crook
nah,u can almost measure this gay, callhim fruit by thefoot
+good opener n good creatvitiy+

ya spirit crushed, it b trampled n solemn
if u bet u could win, then i guess u got a gamblin problem
+nice personal, good set up+

can't believe the mouthin on this fool, i b doubtin on this dude
he got a dickridin calculator, cuz he countin on his crew
+LOL that shit was hard, nothin else to say+

Dice, u small to me, you aint nothin large
rough sex wit his rhymebook, only time ya bars was FUCKIN HARD
+over done n kinda forced+

a trusty lesson, when i swing wit this rusty weapon
his wins plus losses is only way dice gets Lucky 7
+coulda been set up better but good personal again+

im not kind, and im no benign in fact
i say fuck playin wit dice, cuz his rhymes is CRAPS..
+nice closer and good personal yet again+


=Dice
Allow me to introduce myself Squad I am your conscience,
WTF we do’n here? Ya know Dice is nice with the phonics,
+no punch here+

Us in a battle please...it’s just nonsense,
Look fool!!! We can’t even spell Eboniks
+???dont ge tthis, who is WE?+

Put us in the spotlight ‘n’ now I gotta try to save this case…
Fuk let’s just do what we did last time, (bite to save some face)…
+ok punch could made a lil more sense tho+

Ya know them kids is kidding they say you got some skill,
I know losses are tough to swallow, but here…take the pill
+good punch but played, i've used that one before+

It's no joke don’t get me wrong, but ya heart’n’head wanted me to pass this note along
“WTF? YOU DEAF? THAT FAT BITCH IS SING’N YOUR SONG”
+kinda wack, not much of a punch really+

Not try’n to sound cold, but when have we came up with one good punch?
Call it a hunch, but I’m think’n we stay-in-school, c’mon, let’s go pack your lunch.
+ok diss, but flow kinda fell off here, n it lacked some sense+

overall squad's verse was better wit punches, multies and flow
dice needed to make more sense n b a lil original.
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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up