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05-23-04, 06:54 PM | #1 |
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Nope Vs Dominace
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05-23-04, 07:37 PM | #2 |
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05-23-04, 10:32 PM | #3 | |
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So.L0.IsT. My ViKtImZ Don.D (5-0) GhOst354(1-5) ViKtiM Of L.I. - CounTreeJay My ReCoRd TeXt - 2 - 2 Current battles Nope vs NeW:BreeD -Nope vs violation-to-va Nope Vs Ghost354 <img src="http://img56.photobucket.com/albums/v172/taruncheelz/nick_copy.jpg"> |
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05-26-04, 10:03 PM | #4 | |
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N o P e!
yo Check it .... Dominace needs to evacuate this place...its just an opener and im already ahead in this race.... and just so you know, hell prolly no show, vanish wit out a trace ,come back in a day and say he just got in late.... Bullshit he wanted to feed off of my lines, we all know this...i had to blow a L just so i could get my mind in focus...... Back in gear, back on track ... i gave this kid a year .. and his post is wack...... Not even goint to use all 10 lines on this faggot ass pussy... Last bar dont even rhyme because im overcofindent hahah PeacE HaVe Fiun No shOwiN!
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05-26-04, 10:16 PM | #5 |
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just run snitch, because if you come at me, you're done, bitch
.shit, I'm known to turn a 4-4 to a 4-5 like excellent gunsmiths when i diss you b, there will be no reason for a rebuttle dweeb your lines are so long, they could be used as Repunsul's weave you got no fans lame, o wait, there is one, that's word, mayne ya nice to somebody, but somebody's a retard in the 3rd grade kid, you're just so wack, and i wonder how you dont know that ..i will put 7 Clipps to your chest, like a Lamar Odom throwback Nope, just walk out the door, ya exit has been past due whore .because No Pe will ever be tolerated here, like bathroom floors
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05-26-04, 11:04 PM | #6 | |
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Dominace needs to evacuate this place...its just an opener and im already ahead in this race.... and just so you know, hell prolly no show, vanish wit out a trace ,come back in a day and say he just got in late.... ^^ hott shyt but bar was stretched 6/10 Bullshit he wanted to feed off of my lines, we all know this...i had to blow a L just so i could get my mind in focus...... ^^another str8 bar decent punch 6/10 Back in gear, back on track ... i gave this kid a year .. and his post is wack...... ^^ bad just wack especially since it was a line not a bar 2/10 Not even goint to use all 10 lines on this faggot ass pussy... Last bar dont even rhyme because im overcofindent hahah PeacE HaVe Fiun No shOwiN! ^^worst shyt i have seen 0/10 overall: 14/40 (35%) Dominace: just run snitch, because if you come at me, you're done, bitch .shit, I'm known to turn a 4-4 to a 4-5 like excellent gunsmiths ^^hott ass bad fire opener 10/10 when i diss you b, there will be no reason for a rebuttle dweeb your lines are so long, they could be used as Repunsul's weave ^^ str8 fire in this verse so far 9/10 you got no fans lame, o wait, there is one, that's word, mayne ya nice to somebody, but somebody's a retard in the 3rd grade ^^lmfao hott worst than last 2 bars but still good 7/10 kid, you're just so wack, and i wonder how you dont know that ..i will put 7 Clipps to your chest, like a Lamar Odom throwback ^^its over good shyt hott bar 8/10 Nope, just walk out the door, ya exit has been past due whore .because No Pe will ever be tolerated here, like bathroom floors ^^good way to play off his name decent finisher good meta 6/10 overall: 40/50 (80%) vote: Dominace...str8 fire from this man...hott verse all the way through...NOPE was your verse hott???? the answer to this question is your name NOPE!!...yours was ass he killed you in his first two bars...you had some good wordplay but thats it no structure flow punches nothing too hott...this was a one sided battle ~!1!~
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05-27-04, 12:15 AM | #7 | |
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nope
nope u aitn winnin this shit man those where preety weak ass lines all combined into a real shitty verse structure is wack as fuck to fix that shit up and try comin with some punchs some time an that closer was really wack i mean wack really really type wack dominance dominated this shti obviously had nice bit of everything in his shit nice wordplay in that opener and then the next set killed all his verse lmaoo damn nice shit vote dominance
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05-27-04, 05:56 AM | #8 |
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I told you Dominace was hot
Nope that verse was horrible enougth said V - Dominace
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