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01-16-04, 07:42 PM | #1 | |||||||
Words Of A Legend
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Deep Inside ~*Poem*~
IP: DB6B D6F3
"Deep Inside"
I Live a Great life to the Opposing eye My lIfe is great, but I cannot lie inside My eyes is a cry for help My family may seem Perfect But Once inside there is a rift So swift, cant be felt or delt with Dealing with so Muching fighting and BullShit, I'm Starting to wonder if its all worth it So Much pressure, combines to depression, Its hard to Find my Destiny Its all a Huge Lesson that god has Given me you Have to Live and Let go cause this world can seem So low all I'm trying to say is that wether your On target or way off Track It all Just Stacks up on mY SHoulder, everyday I get older, it just feels Like torcher But its our Culture I Shall Live my life My way cause I am a Soldier ~*Alex Words Of A Legend*~ |
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01-16-04, 07:44 PM | #2 | |||||||
Words Of A Legend
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IP: DB6B D6F3
Like it? >:P
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01-16-04, 11:18 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 9A55 2FF0
this was alright but not long enough in the Line man Try And Lengthen Ya Lines..that would improve ya structure and ya FLow..any way this was Alright Keep ELevaten Man And The Cicious Sptz Site is Alright Im Admin on iT
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01-17-04, 01:06 AM | #4 | |||||||
Words Of A Legend
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IP: DB6B D6F3
1.I don't usually use long lines lol,but I'll try
2. Vicious Spitz ya mean? Glad ya like it took me a while to make it :P |
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