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02-09-06, 02:52 AM
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Whos To Blame? [06]
IP: C9E3 41C0
Two quik verses abit of different delivery on the 2nd
http://www.soundclick.com/Excetera http://community.rapverse.com/showt...867#post2649867 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...865#post2649865 Last edited by Excetera : 02-09-06 at 02:55 AM. |
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02-09-06, 04:22 AM
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Addicted
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IP: 86E2 FDE0
intro is cool... waiting for beat to kick in.... beat is sickness, your flow sounds awkward man, ah thats better now, its ok flow wise, delivery could be better, lyrical skills are cool.... hook is pretty cool.... verse 2... this is better than first imo all in all not a bad track man, flow n delivery still need improving n shit, but ur improving every track i hear, keep it up. pz.
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02-09-06, 02:20 PM
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IP: C9E3 41C0
good looks man.
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02-10-06, 11:25 PM
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IP: C9E3 41C0
ups............
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02-11-06, 09:44 AM
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Broke as hell
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IP: 3646 B2FD
the beat is cool...but your flow is a little shaky...just focus more on riding the beat..prescene is there.....just stay up aon the up and up
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