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02-10-06, 10:30 AM
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Ya Boy is bizzack! "I wanna be...so deliver me" new Gospel song...pls. consider
IP: 64CA 6C26
http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox
^^Click on "I wanna be..so deliver me" Beat: Hiphop free beats...from S/C Hook: Written and performed by Q Verses 1 & 2: Tha Q Concept: Realizing that true happiness, deliverance, and salvation comes from God, the father of our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ. Holla back 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221757 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221761 |
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02-10-06, 04:34 PM
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IP: 5453 A690
Ayo!
Its Me  Aight Feelin This Beat Wow@That Hook! Is that You Singing I Always Used To Hate Ur Siniging Feelin That Verse Flows Dope,Deliverys Koo Feeling the lyrics..real gospel like lol,the emotions kooo...your presence is nice..real loving your delivery in this,it works well,your lyrics are koo,i mean like they real smooth i unno how to say it lol umm....ok i'll leave that there lol Well feeling this total song This hooks dope though  Overall: 9/10 Good Track! Rtf On This if you can i dont mind if you dont really:http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=221620&page=1
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02-10-06, 08:11 PM
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OYD
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IP: 64CA 6C26
preciate the ONE PIECE of feed
haa wake up peeps |
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02-10-06, 09:36 PM
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
DOG!!! U R FUCKIN TRASH. R U NIGGAS FUCKIN DEAF??!!! This nigga sounds like a fuckin clown and his raps aint really hot at all. The are like average. Nigga u all hype. 1
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These Pussies Suck Ass..
   Knuckels. I got a hell of a hand, u still developin man.// I'll have you leavin' the ring lookin' like the elephant man.//  |
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02-10-06, 09:59 PM
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IP: 46E3 3347
Yo Q, i'm not religious at all.....but this track wuz strate i can't really compare it to any gospel i know of, cuz I dun listen to gospel...but other than that the flow and lyrics are strate man.....overall it wuz a good track and dun listen to knuckles.....he juss a hater......aiite man stay up....
pz ~1~ feed used 2/14 "Got the Flow"
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02-10-06, 10:01 PM
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IP: 64CA 6C26
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preciate dat dawg... but, you don't have to tell me about KNUCKLE HEAD...I k now a hater when I see one  |
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02-10-06, 10:29 PM
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Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: F1FC 4749
nice, good lyrics and a nice beat as well.......real nice rythm to it imo.......keep 'em coming Q.
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02-11-06, 12:09 AM
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OYD
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IP: 64CA 6C26
preciate da feed bro
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02-11-06, 12:22 AM
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P.S.A**DYNASTY
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IP: 8630 C252
listning....................................
hooks catchy...................................up beat.................... flows dope ............................................. delieverys sik as usual.................. lyrics r deep dope as alwayz................... very catchy track fam.................... one of my favs soo fAR........................... 9/10
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02-11-06, 12:44 AM
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OYD
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IP: 64CA 6C26
no doubt
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02-11-06, 06:43 AM
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IP: 86E2 FDE0
not feeling the beat, is kinda cheasy to me... i dont like that "uh" shit in intro just sounds corny and played.... that singing is well out of tune man, i cant sing so i dont try *hint hint* flow is good but theres time you loose the smoothness in it cos "you end up spit...tin...like this" when u start doing that, its telling u ur line needs filling out slightly n theres a couple lines ur breath control goes off and breaks the smoothness of a line, but for the most part its on point, delivery is good, not amasing but not bad, its good.... i still dont like that "uh" shit, im really not likin the hook man, sorry but ur just waaaaaaaaay out of tune... lyrics are ok, not really my thing, i just cant stand preaching n shit, i just dont see the point myself, but ok.
yeah its ok i guess, i wouldnt listen again, its not my thing, abit too corny for me, but flow n delivery n wat was all on point most th time. peace. |
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02-11-06, 10:30 AM
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OYD
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IP: 64CA 6C26
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer up
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02-11-06, 10:46 AM
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IP: F55D 5630
Third gospel in a row is dope....keep it up....beat is nice expressive...glad ure back....DAMN MAN..the hooks is fuckin amazin...love it mayne....im glad ure bakc..LOL at jay move over...lol man this is sick...lovin the flow and lyrics are good...ure speakin up real nice...lyrics are great actually...my enemy slithers..very niceeeeeee line....DAMN MAN THIS HOOK IS ACTUALLY AMAZING....verse 2 has a gr8 energy...loving the flow...emotion is real dope...delivery is hot..MAN URE BACK!!!/...lol this hook jus gets to me amazin....can we do that track now???..but this is dope...im not even christian but im feelin the message....downloadin..10/10
can u rtf on this: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...102#post2652102
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02-11-06, 01:32 PM
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OYD
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IP: 64CA 6C26
preciate da feed
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02-11-06, 11:49 PM
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IP: 8733 3D5C
Yes I enjoy it, same type of track i'm doing as well. the beat is pretty hype emotional type beat. the hook you did seemed a little wierd but it was to the point and it was pretty inspiring. the verses you did were good, mos def the standing point in your track. lyrics were tight and your flow is very complex and shit I just love it. I like that lil sound behind your hook as well, saying "I wanna be" and shit like that, sounds good. overall i liked this song very good, I thought it was gonna be more smooth but I liked what you did.
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221910 1 and look out for my single "Father Heaven"
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