Check in. I'm going 16

Links -
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2817025
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2817038
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2817050

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The Scholar

Yep we doin nothing less then 16...

check

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2815781
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2816804

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[certified gangsta]

Its Capital B, no joke, you cant see me man
My Quotez dope, make you have seizures man
I aint impressed wit ya lines, Stretched wit no flow
Give it a rest this time, so you should no show
Call me King of the keys like Ray Charles its a fact
Even he cant sleep on me and he takin a dirt nap
Yep I keep a gat, between the pants and tha draws
you keep ya stacks between ya shirt and ya bras
This win dont count on my record cuz you so pathetic
Soned by me ya would have got smacked by poetic
Take a space back and i'll show you what raps bout
cuz imma slap Quotez, out this bitch mouth
Go back to the lab and make some original lines
also get another style cuz yours was originally mine
Heres my claim to Faime, your no scholar or celebrity
I'm wack and your Famous...speaking hypothetically

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well i guess he took the advise....

no show....

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Look, my worst drop is sicker than any of your keys could imagine
and I only get seizures from readin wack shit. .
....so you're the reason I have them!
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You walk in this thread, confident of takin the W, how absurd of em
the last 'heated drop' he had ....was a 'pot cause it was burning em'
Theres 2 rules to rap: (1)gotta have flow--and you got that basic
but the other rule is (2) you gotta be good.
....that was your disqualification!
You not a qualified emcee, cause what good is flow if it aint dope.
you 'in the wrong place'. .
....like 'searchin down at the legs while seekin the throat'
Using Ray Charles lines won't get you nowhere, but to God first
...and a front row ticket to his upcoming concert!
Out of a whole 16 line verse, nothin interesting, thats a shame
matter fact, only thing dope you said in your verse was my name!
My advice ...quit textin, cause everything you drop is a waste.
your dreams are 'shattered on the ground' like 'dropping a vase'
You ain't the captain of nothin, you more like the opposite rank
your 'authority's not sober' like 'cops when they drank'

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The Scholar

Heres my claim to Faime, your no scholar or celebrity
I'm wack and your Famous...speaking hypothetically


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Out of a whole 16 line verse, nothin interesting, thats a shame
matter fact, only thing dope you said in your verse was my name!


Weak Battle, i mean i dont even know how or who to vote for.. i guess ill vote for Faime S. Quotez just cuz he tried some ok wordplay in the opener but stretched it a bit


V/ Faime S. Quotez

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

You droped pass the deadline and you were feeding in your hole 16 but whatever....

I guess most people dont pay attention to rules...

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