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I made this song some months ago. I posted it on RV, but it was slept on. The concept is a creative story-telling piece in which I struggle with my alter-ego. What makes this unique is that you don't know which voice is the alter ego, or whether or not what's happening is really transpiring in reality.


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whats good Q aint peeped ya ish in a minute, aight the beat is str8, flow and presense is nice, the lyrics is dope, the concept is illy to, keep it up man, pm me maybe we can collab sometime.

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beat was very good for the concept. you really need to pan the voices that ur using for the intro and hook areas.

wasnt really feeling the song tho. i dont kno what it was...lyrics didnt realy impress me, and WAIT....U SWITCHED THAT?

wow...2nd part of this is very nice. great beat, much better flow. lyrics stand out harder cuz the flow is better and more pleasing. that highpitch thing is really obnoxious tho.

overall, ok song. work with the 2nd part of the song to make that a full song. and maybe re-do the 1st part with a diferent flow. u tried too hard to stay on the snare, and it didnt work that well. keep up the work tho...pz

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