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Old 12-04-03, 06:44 PM   #1
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Content (Soft Focus) vs Withersman (D.O.I)

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Topic: Liquid Courage

Good Luck.

This is the Revised Topic picked from the SS list...Due Date Adjusted. Here We Go.
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Old 12-05-03, 08:48 PM   #2
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checkin in................................................ ...............................
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Old 12-06-03, 09:39 AM   #3
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Even though Content hasnt checked in, I'm still droppin.

Imagine, runnin for your life everyday seein time fly//
never knowin the time and place you gonna die//
runnin in a world full of, 12 gauge shottys and dreadful deaths//
can't imagine when it will be my last breath//
taking things for granted and livin in hell, and dispair//
and I keep havin these unimaginable nightmares//
and I wonder why I have such a cold heart//
blastin sparks in the baneful dark//
and I can't imagine what the Lord will say when I breathe no more//
instead of seein heaven's gates I may see hell's doors//
paranoid to see the day if I go back to poverty//
I can't cope with insanity, tryna provide while in risk of the penitentiary//
My visions is hectic screamin I DON'T WANT TO LIVE NO MORE//
Livin corrupted, and my girl has tears galore//
and I have a handful of angry tears, thinkin nobody cares//
it seems everything came true of my unimaginable nightmares//
taking things for granted livin in hell and dispair//
as I keep havin these unimaginable nightmares//
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Old 12-08-03, 04:22 PM   #4
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uppin so my guys can see it................................................ .................................................. .........
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Old 12-08-03, 04:48 PM   #5
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a yo, let me keep my verse. Cuz you I dropped that before you changed the topic............................................. ...........................
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Old 12-08-03, 04:49 PM   #6
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ten minutes thinking and typing.....

Liberals confront conservatives as closet
Racist patrons time and time again....

Walking thin lines until they bend to
Tarnish whats sacred deep within.....

Consistent leapfrogs attempt latchin onto
Invisible ladders and freefall....

Leavin potholes in the earth like pennies
Droped from skyscrapers....

Ever since my existance ive been
Gravitys liquid tapestry.....

With my head tilted up as if God's messangers
Screwed up with the packaging.....

Any prayer I decide to quietly recite is
A message to the faculty.....

Like sit down and reminise at the table with
Bread and wine about my integrity.....

And this empty tank of luck that should have been
Stripped from with a births imbilical actually.....

With whats left of me my closest individuals can
Take care of with my last acceptance speech.....

While it rains ill count my blessings reach to new
Hights until this soul leaves a casket free.....

My silhouette rapidly floats down the stream exceeding
The speed limit like there was one.....

Until I subdue from the pass through and release lifes
Grapple im free now thats courage!......

It has you....

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Old 12-08-03, 04:50 PM   #7
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hmmm........sorry no can do you have to write another piece....content is finished with his already....unless you wanna go off of whose piece over all was better....you can keep it if you want...

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Old 12-08-03, 04:55 PM   #8
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^^ not fair.....he wrote it before he knew..

i have a better idea that is fair

they each post 2 verses...one on the first topic and one on the second...thats fair
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Old 12-08-03, 05:06 PM   #9
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I was just told about it like thirty minutes ago..
how about a big fucking NO

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Old 12-08-03, 05:07 PM   #10
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hahhaha no thats just plain stupid....

just rewrite a new verse...it was your crew leader who changed it...

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Old 12-08-03, 07:01 PM   #11
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I wonder how in my life I've remained the same//
I guess it's the liquid courage you gonna have to blame//
gettin by,as everyday I will ride//
In fear of death sheddin tears but inside I cry//
but it seems as if I really dont give a fuck//
survin in this world which is not by luck//
That liquid courage flowin freely in my body//
keepin me strong, cuz I don't want to end up like Kadafi//
cant you see, the pain that flows down my eyes//
and just about two months ago, yo I nearly died//
any regular nigga would've given up//
but you gotta stay strong and keep livin up//
And whats courage?, the ability to stand up to the problems//
and the liquid is the the ability to let nothing block em//
cuz what the liquid is sayin is you can never be broken//
instead of gettin pissed and gettin the shotty and start smokin//
Stayin an Outlaw in this cold baneful world//
appreciatin liquid courage as if it were my girl//
takin greater risks than goin over to Afghanistan//
only the real soldiers will be able to understand//
And everyone in Iraq, they all got the liquid and the courage//
aint lettin nothin blockin them or make them discouraged//
Stayin strong and gettin by is my will//
since my heart and mind is simply always filled//
With the liquid courage

*For those who read, the smokin line means killin*
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Old 12-08-03, 07:52 PM   #12
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lets get some votes in.......
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Old 12-09-03, 03:20 PM   #13
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upppin for some fuckin votes...................................
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Old 12-09-03, 11:06 PM   #14
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anyone gonna vote on this here

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Old 12-12-03, 03:06 PM   #15
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uppin for votes stop sleepin...
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