Look,
im a open this with your hopeless spits are unacceptable.
unbeleiveably painfull to read with no text skill.
ma chest still hurts from the outburst of laughing fits.
your rappings shit........
....that record deal will never happen bitch.
start packing quit.....and stop acting thick
dont say your not.....
...jus peep who your battling with.
im a finish off with this you got killed that quick.
the goverment didnt get a chance......
...to file your birth certificate

u'll get toss off the 2ed floor N hit 2 hours later cuz u'r light-weight
its like going out with a killah, cuz not only im take'in u out im setting ya soul-straight / 1
cuz my bullets consoule mates, and u'r only get ran ova like bug's on the rode-way
N fuck niggas i rather have jail cell hold me, with snipers who know me while u'r getting rape all lonly / 2
u better off sliding off like grease or getting a verse u can lease
cuz onces this kid release, i'll even have jenny crege trying to spit obese / 3
im the main event from the east that'll bomb-shed
with this guy heart in my hand, cuz i got him typing a battle verse UNDER-HE'S MOMS-BED/ 4
its like a pair of tornado boxser this Win(d) is mins
N if u purchsed a vice 4 a mic u still couldnt get a grip on some good rhymes / 5

good luck

not bad for a newb!

good luck
now lets get these votes in

last line was ment to say...
N if u purchsed a vice 4 a mic u still "wouldnt" get a grip on some good rhymes /

intensify u came hard but your flow kinda threw me off wit the gay lines
it was more sick than funny but anway your flow 7.0

riff raff you had some humor in there flow was alright 7.1

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thx
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leave link and i`ll return the favour

Yo Ima Go Wit My Mann Riffraff,
Your Shit Was Pretty Structured And Lyrical And It Went With The Rhythym Of A Good Battle

Intensify Thread, You Were Koo, You Had Good Kicks,
But It Just Wasnt Hard Enuff, Keep At It Thoough , Youll See Youll Start To Elevate In Time,

Aight 1

Oh Yea, Go Ahead And Return The Fav

Lyondreds Vs Marx
Lyondreds Vs Money

Thats All I Ask , Honest Votes
Aight 1

Good Luck

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Yo I Must Say Both Of U Were Good And Droping Sum Serius Rhymes I Wud Like 2 See More Personals

I Think Riff Raff Just Got It Thru Havin A Better Structure But Intensify U Were Gud

Hav A Look At Marx Vs Lyondead
And Marx Vs Slugga

Honesty Is Da Best Policy Thanx

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intensity had good lines,but flow was off
riff raff flow was better,also had humor in there
riff raff also had some killa multiz

vote riff raff

return the favor plz

Money vs Lyondreds

thx dogs
uppin

Riff Raff: nice drop man had ya flow ok little persnaols i think and punches it was ok i liked the ryhmin style you had there

Intencity:The flow? Hell No it was kinda hard to read ya lines and understand it. but once i read it 4 times it was good but not as Riff raffs some good disses

im going to go with





Riff Raff

Vote on one of my battles ok

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...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

Fuck Me I Already Won This
Anyway Uppin For Some Votes That Wont Get D'qd

riff raff: pm me after this...

u had a nice drop, good rhyme scheme and good personals, liked ur flow

instensity

wasnt feelin ur flow or strucutre, punches and personals were weak, punches and structure win battles

v/riff raff

COULD YOU PLEASE VOTE ON THE BATTLE WITH YOUNGTHUG IN MY SIG, THANKS

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