aight heres two battle verses i made against two different people tell me wot u think..........

[laugh] look at ‘Luke Thurlow’
ayo he got less flow den Choobbaka and hand so-lo,
cruising through tha galaxy at high speeds/
who needs booze ‘Luke’ u amusing me to easily,
I thought we were battle rapping?/
standing wit ur mouth open fly catching,
yeh shit does happen but I didn’t think it came out ur gob/
yo if emcee’in woz in classes “hey ima snob”,
spittin my shit to ollie twist/
spittin ur shit like its dissin me,
u better quit quickerly before u submit to a suicidal fatality
n get hit lyricly/ a mimic of electric exorcist, withdrawing tha happiness from ur chest at high pressure compressed till u callapse/
hittin wit so hard contact u cant react, it’s a fact u wont leave dis battle intact/
perhaps u should go back home and pick up a pencil,
use tha utensil to produce a sensible rhyme/
instead of dis wack ass lines u speaking,
u aint worth competing coz my mental words are creditable, invincible to be infused by my opposition/
my position is too tense to not release my fusion

[2]
my style neva fades away its a renegade,
mind made to slave ur brain changing its maintain to insane,
crumbling like clay ina palige of 2 mill rats,
hoo listend to craig chattin like he all dat ,
blah bloo blah yo u aint gonna get too far,
woz dat suppose to be a punch in dat bar?
Mo like a raw compliment bout my bra
Ill tell ur doc-tor to prevent ur treatment
coz u cant teach a whack emcee how to speak n bounce to tha beat
yo dats suminc u cant do u can be who?
U cant be me never be on tha level of roxy
Tha majority of me sayin let him leave
Tha rest disagrees telling u to bleed
My words r tha nightmare to ur fear
Reacting dracular bittin ur neck till ur nearves screem
Pleed for mercey im rockin tha earth see
Tha looniest dopest ferocious femcee
walkin dis world like a pulse eater, illest speeker, dream seeker, mic freaker

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im capable of anything my amagination can give me wings, like doves flyin over streets watching many things//Nas