aiight rules is....

10 lines min
12 lines max
no crew votes
no hate votes
no d/r votes
first to 5 votes wins
blind spit 30 mins after check in verses have to be done


im checkin in now

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

ok forgot about this shit checkin in

aiight check it......

im smackin this ghost whore with raps from a deep gorge//
ADFSGHJ is what youll see cause i'll slam ya head on the keyboard//
despise you more cave ya chest in till ya spine is sore//
you must be chewin on "PIGS" cause ya rhymes is "BOAR"//(BORE)*
my names absurd ill "pull ya fuckin veins thru ya skin" you herb//
so when i literally jump on this bitch ill really be "on his nerves"//
rhymes will rip you in short..so you better wear a lyrical vest//
ghost the best? thats all "thought and no action" "like cyber-sex"//
yo im past the verbalz..and ghost is as fast as turtlez//
and if wins was pussy then i'd get more...ass than gerbilz//
keystylin is what im about be smart u dont wanna test one//
shyt!! i could "marry your mother" and u still couldnt "step-son"//

explanation:
*=BOAR is a PIG...and his rhymes are BORE as in boring

~!1!~

u got 30 mins after check in

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

might az well write ya linez wit careless regret
whipe ya ass wit a k mart jersey you just puttin shit on the net
if ya flow gets intelligent as the world turnz then wheres the skill?
seems like the earthz rotation must be on fuckin standstill
you ran out of flow so i suggest jog away from this battle
and come out the closet like dieterz pantz cause you sweet as fiddle faddle
face it im Son'n You fam i dont needta take a blood Test
only way yo uever make it in rap is by sayin hi whatz your request?
my style consistz of fabricz made By mattin wool no wonder im felt
you writin datez n timez on ya jock to get some whenz under ya belt


whenz=winz

nice spit nigga finally somebody else that can actually freestyle a verse on this site with personalz in it


get some votez on this

i ain't fin to wryte alot
so here is my rating...
opener...FLOW
flows...FLOW
blows...FLOW
lyricism...FLOW
finisher...FLOW



ghost u wack, come back reincarnated!!!!!!!!

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

lol wow a hate vote cause i voted against you good job cock smoker shits gettin cancelled regardless

ya it looks like a hate vote dont got too many friends do ya ghost lol j/k

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

naw cause i speak whatz real niggaz cant stand it either lol

nice spit nigga good battle

uppin for votez

ya good verse from you too...i get hate votes pretty much every battle i lose or d/r votes but i dont care my record speaks for itself

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ok check this

Ghost....

Aight good verse good punches you just gotta come more creative next time with a little more complexity you had played punches you know shit that has been used alot on here but it was still a good verse

Flow

good verse also flow was a little bit off more than ghosts but your mad wordplay made up for it seeing how i judge more on creativity on punches more than flow...

Vote goes to Flow Intelligent

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im smackin this ghost whore with raps from a deep gorge//
ADFSGHJ is what youll see cause i'll slam ya head on the keyboard//

^^ nice...but I've seen something similar before

you must be chewin on "PIGS" cause ya rhymes is "BOAR"//(BORE)*
my names absurd ill "pull ya fuckin veins thru ya skin" you herb//

^^^ clever...but I used a "boar" line similar in 2002...not bad tho

rhymes will rip you in short..so you better wear a lyrical vest//
ghost the best? thats all "thought and no action" "like cyber-sex"//

^^ that was hot
keystylin is what im about be smart u dont wanna test one//
shyt!! i could "marry your mother" and u still couldnt "step-son"//

^^^ nice closer...but again, seems familiar


Not sayin you BIT anything dawg, jus saying some of those lines are just new spins on old ideas...well done/clever


7.5/10

From: TX
Status: Online
IP: 72C2 4720


might az well write ya linez wit careless regret
whipe ya ass wit a k mart jersey you just puttin shit on the net
if ya flow gets intelligent as the world turnz then wheres the skill?
seems like the earthz rotation must be on fuckin standstill


^^ not feelin the flow or the punches

blah

my style consistz of fabricz made By mattin wool no wonder im felt
you writin datez n timez on ya jock to get some whenz under ya belt

^^ NO...not feelin it

6.5/10

elevate your punches dawg...vocab was horrible...its not that you didn't use BIG words, they just sucked. (weren't descriptive enough)


Vote: Flow

YOGHost u lacked Potention and STRUCTURE i mean ya PUNCHES Aight but flow RIPPEd it

FLow u dint lack n e thing but missed out onna lil <M.U.L.T.I.S> but for everything else GOOD SHIT

BEST LINE FLOW:: rhymes will rip you in short..so you better wear a lyrical vest//
ghost the best? thats all "thought and no action" "like cyber-sex"//


BREAK DOWn

Flow inTellIgent

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 9/10
Structure 8/10
Punches 9/10
34/40

GHOST

Flow 6/10
RHymes 7/10
Structure 4/10
Punches 5/10
22/40

WEAK

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aight noce drop by both of yall

but i got to give it to flow intel- i was feelin his flow alot more and his wordplay was sick- punches and personals hit harder and he was more creative-G just work on makin you punches and personals harder and you might when dogg

vote=flow

can yall drop an honest vote on this

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123015