"this is an old rhyme of mine, on the original rapbattles, i just added a new verse" (kind of an eminem feel)

People think i'mma dick, cuz of the way i spit (what?)
always bringin emotions, and my people into my shit
it's not my fault, you bitches probly deserve it (yup)
my anger? there's just no way i can conserve it
always being dissed, pissed, never missed (true)
you wonder why i bring you bitches into this

ayo look

My rhymes will make you cry, make ya wanna die
slit your wirst, and wanna commit suicide
with a gak by my side, y'all think i'm livin a lie
i ain't tryin to be black, i'm just a plain white guy
gettin shit of my chest, doin what's best
don't give a damn, if you are impressed
take a look at my rhymes, swallow and digest
i ain't quite evil, but i'm half possessed
I'm a Demonic Discisple, not quite the devil
i'll elevate some more, then soon be at that level

when i spit i spit...don't give a shit
gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit
i'll always commit, and do it legit
gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit

Better watch your back when i'm near
cuz i'll stab ya, then dissapear
make you shed a tear, when i steal your career
when verb comes around, your better stand clear
cuz i'm ballistic realistic, just plain linguistic
go ahead and temp me, i'm sadistic
droppin rhymes, here there everywhere
next one could be bout you, so ya better prepare
writing rhymes just outta no where
come a knocking, and ya better beware

when i spit i spit...don't give a shit
gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit
i'll always commit, and do it legit
gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit

i started off slow, i earned the respect
writing rhymes non stop, whatcha expect?
that i'd..sit back watch my life fall down the drain
if i didn't have a pad or a pen, i'd go insane
this is my life, i got no where else to turn
got my friends and family a little concerned
"what will you do if you dream don't come true?"
i may turn my back, but i'll never bid you adieu
i'll never quit i'll always be writing
till the day i die, i'll always be fighting

when i spit i spit...don't give a shit
gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit
i'll always commit, and do it legit
gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1488308
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1488322

uppin

quit sleepin

drop some feed

anyone......

great peice verbatim, i really liked, it, more people should reply to this

bump....

can i please ge some feed back on this

diss was kinda tight if u
want i gotta collab u could
do wit me called can i get votes
da link at da bottom check it out
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143466

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ya tight shit man 6/10 good

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how you get them little guys where you get them in yer pic on yer avatar?

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