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Old 04-24-06, 12:41 PM   #1
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Old 04-24-06, 01:01 PM   #2
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Well I Like The Layout And All, But Th Scanlines Don't Look Proffesional At All And The Text With Patterns Makes It More Like A Large Sig. I Ain't Feeling The Pixel Font Either. Change The Text And Fix The Scanlines And It'll Be Dope
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Old 04-24-06, 05:30 PM   #4
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^LOL..

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Old 04-25-06, 09:23 PM   #5
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It's pretty good, not cause it's T.I, I aint hate T.I but for the graffix it's pretty good. The fonts are decent probably the weakest part about it but the bg designs make up for it.
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Old 04-26-06, 05:45 AM   #6
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fukin dope but like para said the colours bring it down a bit! I think it would look better if they were the same type of colour as the bg (greenish) and change the text that is black and the TAKE MONEY black bits, they dont look right!
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Old 04-30-06, 07:14 PM   #7
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Its eye catching.Thats all that matters..just the font for the title..Eww.
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Old 04-30-06, 09:44 PM   #8
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This is pretty tight. And the font wouldn't be bad if it didn't have that texture to it. Nice job man
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Old 04-30-06, 10:07 PM   #9
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It's mainly the gradient I don't like.
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Old 04-30-06, 10:27 PM   #10
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nah i relle think this is good. The gradient is alright by me. Overall this is coo
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Old 04-30-06, 11:41 PM   #11
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chea..............
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Old 04-30-06, 11:43 PM   #12
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well i love the money in the background, the colors just flow really nicely there
actually i like the colors of this piece in general

however the text is a complete bomb
too much gradient, too much shadow...it looks like a bunch of begginer stuff

that whole "blur-overlay" effect has gotten slaughtered as well, meaning im extremely sick of seing it...so it dont really help your piece out in my book

overally though i see potential in it
id definetly re-open it and fix up some things
text work especially, thats the biggest downfall of the piece...
but not bad
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Old 05-02-06, 06:19 PM   #13
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it was nice until you added

1. scanlines.
2. that horrid overlay/blur on T.I.
3. the stroke on that text.
4. the text, and text placement in general.

i do, however, think this would look fairly nice if the above was fixed.
i think the background, and the colors would show up nicely.
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