10 Lines..
Due in 1hour..
House Rules..
G'luck..

in it to win it...
dunno if ya'll do K.O's or not but if you dont.. it wont matter..

checking in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

aint read your verse but the cleverest thing you said was "checking in",
your not sikk bcus yo mun rapped you in cotton wool so a sickness wudnt get in..
lookin for win number 5 your lookin for loss 5,
my punches are stingin like your in a bee hive..
your a posh English rapper from sumerset,
well im from the US, nockin you out like the sun had set..(nock out darkness)
now people said your good.. there just silly,
you cudnt "cum Phat" if you ejaculated free willy"
now its true your a loner an outsider,
losin to me is just creating another suicider..

quick 10 bitch.

imertating your name rascal from dizze rascal, and your tryin to tackle/
this fuckin-gay-ass was born from pencilvania, where ders draculars/
you like to hide your shit, cuz ur lost 2 many times and still wid it/
let me say something rascal, finish it, throw it cause u an't clever bitch/
rascal your gettin beaten to death, im seeping your breath leavin u left/
i spit the truth, specially at goofs and be sure gonna dismantle my fith/
this bitch, said dat commnt about ejaculating, dats only you when you shower/
pretending to talented, but all i see is dat ur demented, i'll kill you wid my powers/
slam you to da ground, smash your head in wid some pans, break ur back parolysed/
the battles bin taken, you shoulda never spoken cuz ur a joke and you bin hipnotysed/

upping for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

rascal when you come ova to this side?????

but yeah here the break down

flow-R
closer-R
opener-R
punches-R
personals-Tie
structure-Tie
creativity-R
enjoyment-R

rascal's best bar

now people said your good.. there just silly,
you cudnt "cum Phat" if you ejaculated free willy"


^^^yo mand that shit had me cracking up....nice punch

you could work on your structure a little bit becuase it was stretched in quite a bit of places.....your punches seemed weak compared to who hard you usually come over on Old RB......your ish was gud man just workon your punches and work on your structure a lil bit man and everything should be fine man..........keep elevating


outsiders best bar


this bitch, said dat commnt about ejaculating, dats only you when you shower/
pretending to talented, but all i see is dat ur demented, i'll kill you wid my powers/

^^^sucks that that was your best bar others didnt rhyme

tackle and draculars only rhyme if you force it and you should never have to force your rhymes.....fith left dont rhyme either man.......i dont know if you have anywins on your record but only way i see you gettin wins with that type of rhyme sceem is if you use that shit against KKKhater......you need to elevate and work on your rhyme sceem and shit.....peace

v/Rascal

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Outsider I'm ya boy and all being from England.
But you punches were not as heavy as Rascal.
And that "now people said your good.. there just silly,
you cudnt "cum Phat" if you ejaculated free willy" bar killed it dawg.
Hot spit dawg.

Holla at cha boy

Rascal from president.

aight Outsider only one bar rhymed in the entire scene & it wasn't
even that good & your flow was aight not the best, vocab blah!
some pretty good words.......

RASCAL aight you merked him BAADDDD!!!! your flow was aight,
but your punches hit a shitload harder than Outsider did your best
bar was:

now people said your good.. there just silly,
you cudnt "cum Phat" if you ejaculated free willy"

^^^^^ funny shit

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BLAH! what a fucking hater he could have a lot more potential in the future......AND A EMBARASSMEN TO ENGLISH RAPPERS IS 50 PENCE
ever heard of "In Da Pub"

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shut up.. yes i killed him..

yo dis battle sucked both mc's need 2 elevate but outsider came wit it in da personals but rascal bounced back and hit harder in punches and overall flow'

v-rascal

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Rascal you fucking CUNT you're english & your saying your AMERICAN hahaa you fucking sad wannabe,

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