Thing
homegirl oh hell no u have ya mug n ya sig. .ya grotesque
provoke is jus a day away from losing her last 2 upper teeth
personal,-flo = 4
ya nose looks like a alien. .red &"rudolf" like,the thing secretes
ugly pose,get a comb,even adolf hitler's goteak is more unique
personal,metiphore = 5
& who ya tryna inpress wit ya avy,maybe abortion babies
ya n distress,cuz that whack shit is as gangsta as the mid 80's
-confusion,personal? = 3
kill ya self now,ya conjest,not supported,an easily aborted mess
kill ya existence,ya nonexistent,distroted face,"bort" type pest
punch,multi = 6

OK nothing breath taking, One line about his avy had me sort of confused. Maybe you can explain that one. Other than that you focused too much on that sig as if it was your only chance of winning. Next time a lil more creativity would be better. Work on that.
Overall = 18
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Provoke
I've checked your past weak battles.. they're merely text squabbles
It's hardly surprising.. My sig?.............. It's Things role model
personal,vocab,-indirect feed = 7
Punches don't land.. intelligence shots that in reality.. all missed
Past verses.. Honestly.. you've used words that don't even exist
metiphore,repeated personal,personal = 6
Exposing herbs.. I'll cane this chump.. he'll simply be left distraught
Thing takes time to chill out..... and organize his one thought!
metiphore,punch,vocab,punch = 8
I've been disconnected twice, got a drink.. and still I'll merk you
It's effortless.. this herbs a leader.. head of a one man crew!
-self hype,personal = 5
Satans Descendants.. be realistic.. it's plain to see its fools talk
In all seriousness.. I've eaten this wannabee with his own damn fork..
metiphore,personal,-flo = 5

I liked this one.Good mixture of personals and punches along with consistant flo apart from your ending. Not sure if that was actually feeding either, could have been a crazy coincidence, but i subtracted points to be safe. Just seemed to fall apart a lil bit in the end but overall well put.
Overall = 31
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Vote = Provoke

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Oakley -v- Empire

man thing you lost....prov took this
in every aspect of the battlefield....
if you knew of his skill you probably wouldnt have battle him though
its all good mayne.....you lost though
he just ripped right through you no problem..

v/prov

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this shit still open. .lol
uppin5 to close this. .

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iight provoke kill dis kid and hez only a newb
Struture: Tie
Flow: Tie
Multiez: NONE
PUNCHEZ: Provoke
VOTE~Provoke