dabatos vs George K. Stanza

Dabato came like he was writing a topical….It wasn’t a poem and that kinda sucked lol…so maybe he should have been Dqd, but whatever…He had nice imagery and decent emotion…Flow was kind choppy and his rhyme scheme sometimes left. Overall a decent topical verse

George came….whack…fuckin herb…jk….good drop here…sort of a freeverse of shorts. …nice emotions and vivid imagery…and also an original take and structure

Winner= George


wicked clown vs lyric

Wicked clown came ok…I thought his rhyme scheme was pretty simplistic, the story was meh…get more original, add some internslas..and this kid has potential…he’ll improve and I’m looking forward to a rematch

Winner= Lyric


cali vs whyte ave.

C.A.L.I…..came well…good vocab and internals altho they got a bit boring to read after a while….I suggest that you try and switch it up a bit..don’t throw in a bunch of big words all the time cause it made you flow come and go…imagery was decent, but I think you can step up the emotion a tad…good drop this week

Whyte Ave….You started with some very nice internal rhymes…and then it seemed like you forgot how to do them….your learning tho buddy which is a good sign…for a quick drop this was very nice…altho I felt it ended abruptly….keep going at it man…you have mad potential

Winner= Cali


lady~fiya vs king~dipset

King wins cause the Lady no showed…fucker
King had an ok piece…but it bored me to death,,,,if your topic is “Foggy Christmas” …NO ONE wants to read sumthin about Christmas where it is foggy outside. Be creative with it.

Winner= King Dipset


bloomquist vs acuity vs flow intelligent

Acuity is the only one that showed…props for takin this league seriously…better show this week
Like George you kinda switched back and force between a regular verse and a freeverse….I liked it…your flow was mostly fine cause your syllable count was nicely done….came apart a few times but nothing major….good use of vocab, but be careful not to cram too much in there…you’re a good poet, G’luck this week.

Winner= Acuity

i think Dabatos is a she mayne...
anyways...
decent breakdowns
could've been better
what about the interview?
and you should do a best line(s)
or stanza type thing
nah sayen

Just Make Sure I Get You Next Week When Im 2-0 Id Like To Beat You And Be 3-0

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should be a competition I will be waiting for.

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vs super

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...918915&posted=1

me Cali?
or lyric?

lyric cuz he talking like he mad dope hes aight but im much better so i want him next

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word, i want to see that matchup

I think Lyric would take it

well of course you would rb is known for dickriding

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I'd vote for the better poem
Im just sayin Lyric is dope and I think he'd take it
could be really close though