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It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal...
But it's treason when you turn your back on your people.

you again... lol

my bad for the day late, its not really mixed.....as club banger as a I get


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...&songID=7363104

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It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal...
But it's treason when you turn your back on your people.

glad you dropped fams

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...&songID=7363494

this one here really came down to who hit the topic more this week
It is supposed to be a club banger...so heres my breakdown


One way-overall you werent bad on the mic man, you sort of got a different
style with the way you record. but it doesnt sound bad. I think you had a good
rhyme scheme. Your imagery was good, i liked your overall word usage. The chorus/hook wasnt bad. I def. think that was the part that stood out. but overall
this really didnt approach me or hit me as a club banger. it just didnt hit hard enough


bob-same with you. you sound great on the mic man, you got a good voice for this
Your rhymes are dope as well. You put everything together well. I think you hit the topic, and had the right idea. Its just that sound, it didnt come as a club banger. It just wasnt banging. i wasn't feeling your chorus as much either.


v. one way. overall it was close, i jus think one ways chorus was a little bit more clubish than bob's. close though, hopefully this will get more votes.

good luck

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yeah
i was kind of pressed for time. I would of came proper
I dropped one 18 bar verse and if you want to call it a chorus lol
and one dropped a whole damn track on me and shit
props tho man

I didn't find either of these relatively close to a club banger, but hey.

Beat choices were okay,

One way it sounded more like a punchline song than a "club" song. I don't know it was cool for listening purposes but it didn't make me say "club banger"

Boberric, you have the same problem you kind of just threw together a lot of multies and such that really didn't relate to what's happening in the club, it was cool, but not for this topic.

Overall if I was to say who put together a better song I'm going with one way, he had a better overall song, but neither of you did a club banger.

So my vote

One Way

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The Music

^ Word..

Neither of these were a club banger, but one way made the better song.

Vote: one way.