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02-16-04, 11:25 AM
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Collab: What About Me??
IP: F127 8F9A
Collab of M.Perror Ming and TiLLEyEDiE: What About Me??
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I Strive Off Attention.. I'm Getting None What Should I Do
Theres A Special Somone.. For Everyone You See Too Busy With Themselves.. But What About Me? TiLLEyEDiE I Stay Patiently Waiting To Be Notcied In The Dark Depths I'm Invincible.. At Least Invisible............ To The Top Vets I Work Harder Than Anyone Should To Get A Strong Rep But U Crush It When Seemingly Forget Im Right Here Your Never Scared? Dont Be Silly Make Yaself Clear Look At Me.. Really Look At Me.. Now Tell Me What You Fear Yall Claim To Be Number One...... But What About Me I'll Be Remarkable Teach Me.. I'll Be Plain Astounding Yall Will Never Forget My Name.. Cuz It Will Be Announced, See? Continously Looked Over.. But I Never Been So Real Take A Glance. ...... Blantly.. I'm The Boy With Unknown Skills Im The Kid In The Future.. Exploiding.. Im Juss Making Deals But Please Believe.. I Never Try And Run Im Too Good For That Im Spitting Every Day.. Just So I Can Get My Own Back From Stack To Stack.. I Push To Got From Whack To High Stats You Still Dont Understand? You Weren't Listening You See Face It.. Ya Too Busy With Yourselves.. But What About Me? Chorus
I Strive Off Attention.. I'm Getting None What Should I Do
Theres A Special Somone.. For Everyone You See Too Busy With Themselves.. But What About Me? M.Perror Ming (~Deluxe-Edition~)
Please dont forget about me cuz Im still here,yep Im still on this sphere
But no one hears me or sees me till the mist comes clear I try every day to not be ignored and I always perservere, still doesnt work Cant take this ignoring anymore so I quit my job and go berserk I was a bank clerk then I quit and now I am one of those guys that are shirk Everyday flies and no one knows me and no ones opposes me Hear people talking and they are talking of me still being here supposably Hate this shit, I WANNA BE NOTICED!!!!!!!!! IT FEELS LIKE MY WHOLE SOUL IS ROMOTEST!!!! Please somebody look at me and talk cuz I cant stand this I wish I could go back to the beggining and reminisce The attention and interaction is what I most miss The people ignore me like I am a dinosuar and I dont exist Yup I have skills of rapping but no one can listen to them I am having a heart failure please get me some Cardizem Please just notice me cuz you will be happy with my talent Im more aware of my skills then a guy that is a gallant I have more talent then Sylvester Salvant Please I beg you, Please I beg you, Please I beg you Here I my rhymes that you can view and look through Still I am being ignored again and again cant you see? I always ask the people of America, "What About Me??" Chorus
I Strive Off Attention.. I'm Getting None What Should I Do
Theres A Special Somone.. For Everyone You See Too Busy With Themselves.. But What About Me? Next Year in the City Newspaper.... "Two boys found dead in a parking lot out side of Pizza Express The boys were in raggedy clothes with blood and they were a mess Someone said that they always dressed like that and they could careless One of the two boys friends said they were going through a lot of stress But no one knows what made them stressed and depressed We have investigated and found that success is what they obsess we guess Also we investigated some more and found slits on their necks There was blood everywhere and on one of the boy`s specs Later that evening we found they killed them selves because of being ignored And they dressed like that because it`s alll they could afford Anyone that can find out the whole case will get a hundred dollar reward Both of them had the same dynasty ring They were knowned by the name of TiLLEyEDiE and M.Perror Ming."
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<img src="http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/attachment.php?attachmentid=9053&stc=1". A Writer`s Talent Comes From A Writer`s Mind M.Perror Ming<>Literate<>Student
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02-16-04, 12:16 PM
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IP: 6236 079F
dis was a pretty good collab....maybe even better than the azn pride ones, topic was kind of played, but it was still a pretty damn good collab, the imagery was good, nice use of multis, excellent flow, overall 9/10............try out for cryogenix
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02-17-04, 05:04 PM
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PuRe AzN..
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IP: 06F7 E5EF
up it
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02-17-04, 05:10 PM
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Good collab a lot of deatil from both of you. emotionly very well rounded good concept. you both fit well together with your styles. keep it up...i think you's should do a part 2...very good dope piece
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 |
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02-17-04, 05:24 PM
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This was pretty nice for a collab..Topic isnt completely original but you know everyone has different versions of things...I like how you portrayed the life being at an end in the newspaper article
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02-17-04, 10:08 PM
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PuRe AzN..
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Anthem Finished
IP: 8232 A2A8
up it
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Nuff Said |
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