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Old 01-31-06, 12:43 PM   #1
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Easy Come Easy Go

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www.soundclick.com/snypaakarooftop

its called Easy Come Easy Go

read the song description


leave feed, ill RTF
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Old 01-31-06, 01:22 PM   #2
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that beat's nice as hell.....you did fall of your flow at points but it's pretty good fam. try to stay on beat the most. nice shit yo
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Old 01-31-06, 01:24 PM   #3
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chea, i did lol

thanks, uppin
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Old 01-31-06, 08:52 PM   #4
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14 views, one feed?????


bbummmmmmmmmmpppp
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Old 01-31-06, 10:04 PM   #5
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Listening...

I used the same beat, with the exact same song title lmfao...

Flow starts off...it's choppy...it's on beat good enough, but there are alot of pauses. Lyrics are at some points basic, but they're straight. Hook is pretty straight...

Our hooks are even close...

Verse 2, flow is better...falls off at the end though...

Decent track, just keep it up, and you'll get better.
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Old 01-31-06, 10:10 PM   #6
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chea man, thanks for the feed, i did alot better in my diss track...na'mean..?? lol
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Old 01-31-06, 11:09 PM   #7
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This was an ok song. It had an ok hook. The beat was pretty dope. The rhymes where kind of basic, but you used some good ones in there. The flow was good for the most part. Stay up, keep droppin' them tracks.

7.5/10
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Old 02-04-06, 10:41 PM   #8
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*listening*

Beat sounds cool so far.......you had the right volume level for that intro part, but then you had the same low volume for your verse. I'm not really feeling the flow too much....it's pretty basic. Hook was pretty nice. I can't tell if the quality was there because you had the vocals too low.....but it sounds alright. You need some more presence too......you seem to be just talking like you don't even believe what you are talking about.....what I like to do is act like I'm angry at the mic when I spit....it helps get you in the right mood....lol

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Old 02-05-06, 01:35 AM   #9
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aiight thanks man
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