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07-23-05, 01:26 PM
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.Artik Phrost & Khatharsis Presents: "A Fiegn Of Face"
IP: 6E69 7B24
Khatharsis....Followed by Artik Phrost
.A Feign Of Face. If its what i want to hear and need So i'm not fed with lies Why does it hurt so much so i bleed inside So whatevers left of me dies There is no good choice Whether to trust The decieving voice That rips me open and adjusts My mind with pain So i cant take it any longer So my thoughts are forever stained With no more strength im not stronger The truth or lies? Which is worse There is no difference Which hurts more in reverse No ending or entrence No stop I Look Into Your Eyes And Truth Corrodes My Mind How Can One’s Lips Play The Sweetest Melodies …Underneath The Bass Of The Sweetest Lie? Its Like You’re Talking Without Guidance Or Cause Your Mouth Sales The Story Like Business Matter …Yet Your Iris Campaigns Whats Not Written On Walls And Even Though Its Clear, I Still believe Every Word Just Block Out The Picture Stored Deep Within …You Don't Love Me, But Me Not Loving You Is Absurd As If Telling The Truth Would Really Ease Pressure I Want To Know or Feel No More, So I Guess …I Want To Hear Goodness And None-the-Lesser ‘Than a Feign of Face’
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..:: Artik In The Phlesh::.. .Re-Writing The Re-Run.  |
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07-23-05, 01:27 PM
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07-23-05, 04:11 PM
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Rastafari Walk Tall
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Thankyou for going by link rule :thumbuP: ....ill feedback on this l8r...
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07-24-05, 07:25 AM
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i liked this poem a lot....... i liked how the rhyme scheme was set up....good imagery.....i wrote a peice like this before its on my computer ill find it.....ill hit ya's up and we'll do a collab or something...the poem was hott..
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