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Old 05-29-06, 02:21 AM   #1
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::Another Day::

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Words travel like the wind, but are quiet like the breeze
My world is looking dim; I can’t put my mind at ease
I’m surrounded by a crowd and I still feel lonely
Those who I thought were my closest friends hardly even know me

And just when I think there’s someone in the world who understands
They can’t relate to how I feel, and fate switches hands
But beyond what most call that charm and charisma
Most people consider me to be an enigma

They can’t figure me out; my mind’s surrounded by doubt
I can’t find the road to riches cuz I took the wrong route
But who’s gonna be the one to point me in the right direction
Those who feel imperfect are sometimes closest to perfection

Reflections of a past self remain constant reminder
Of the way I was, but now the days seem kinder
So I live my life to the fullest, I can’t dwell in this sorrow
The things we do today will be our memories tomorrow

I'll just wait another day...

I tried to escape the loneliness through the wrong door
And it backfired, showing me all that I longed for
I remember when someone special walked hand in hand with me
That thought single handedly made an uninspired woman of me

I’d find a song that I’d connect with, but then I’d play it out
Emptiness turned me into a shiftless lay-about
A motionless pen arose, forced me to take all this
And paint a picture, refining the rawness

But slowly it happened, my brush strokes weren’t the broadest
My mind envisioned the twilight beach skyline in August
I walk along the water across the wide beach
While always staying slightly out of the tide’s reach

My life was like the sand, it transformed with each step
I wrote, and my pen told the secrets it kept
Remembering footprints behind me, seagulls flying by
I taste the air; the ocean wind, and the salty sky

The breeze caressed my face and made me wanna run away
To wherever it was going, I’d return another day

I'll just wait another day...
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Old 05-29-06, 04:10 AM   #2
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cool shit girl I liked it.
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Old 05-29-06, 05:14 AM   #4
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thank you guys for the feed...i'm in your sig and all cuz you thought i was fake. at least now ya know. haha. well i'll def drop some more...pz
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Old 06-02-06, 05:33 PM   #5
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This was pretty much all tight....you had a flow that alot of peep's dont have when you write...an all around good drop
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this was what i thought of as the best part....
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I’d find a song that I’d connect with, but then I’d play it out
Emptiness turned me into a shiftless lay-about
A motionless pen arose, forced me to take all this
And paint a picture, refining the rawness
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