umm the rules where 6-8 hahah you did 9 verse thats againts the rules and you only got the vote because you ask him to vote for you in the chat room this morning so thats cheating

Voted For: DJ BANANAZ

punches was not all that good but....i liked it better than hers

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Voted For: Yvonne

punches are stronger, rhymes and flow came more direct,personnals are more hard hitting.

return the favour, @. vs natural killer

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Voted For: Yvonne

u get this vote

basically the other kid was kinda elementary like i can tell hes young.....i like yvonnes rhyme scheme and word play good shit no hate jus potin my honest opinion

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Voted For: DJ BANANAZ

yvonne, nothing really stood out, your punches didn't have flow or creativity, and really hurt them. no personals, which can really influence a battle. structure was fine, but that adds little.....you really need to work on creativity and wording of punches. get right to dissin' him, don't focus on other stuff, and try not to make punches about his dick, because how the hell would you know. get more creative, expand your horizons a little, think outside the box, elevate

dj bananaz, nice verse man, i see you've elevated from the last time i read your stuff, you really put a packing on her. you came out consistent with punches, that really seem to connect and your verse had a nice overall flow, which really brought everything together....overall, you did quite nicely, but i feel you lack some creativity in punches as well; getting off into some played shit, thats bad, try and avoid that, but you've elevated quite a bit, so continue along, good work man

rtf on this http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d=1#post2383335

v/dj bananaz

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rotfllllllllllllllllllllllllll...lmmfaoooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooo

this is pure madness....

1) mr bananaz...i told him to vote on this battle cos it was gettin slept on..i didnt tell him to vote for me
2) u said we cud add more till where we can get to...or am i mistakin...re-read ur posts and u'll c i aint frontin
3)lmmfao...at the continuos dq's this all fucked up mayne...is drakel really serious or there was some shit that went on b4 he voted?...ahh fuck it...
4)peeps keep votin and xplain ur damn vote yo...plzzz...so we get this shit closed
5)i wonder y i decided to battle u...prolly cos i thought u were a gd one(bein it that u kept ur text rec hid)...never will i make this mistake...nubees always piss me off when they c they gettin ripped...fuck fuck fuck...

holla

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yo bitch my text rec was not hidden stupid ass it said 0-0 grafix 0-0 next look before you run your mouth .... and it seems that im winning so who is the newbie

lmmfao...now i wanna beef or wha?...u got the wrong person cos i hate it!
well i didnt c ur text rec if not i wudnt have replyed to ur call out...and dont start feelin like u've won dude its just one vote...this wuda been closed if there werent no dq's u know...its all gd mayne dont be gettin pissed off yo...lmao...

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uppin this shit mayne left fold it up peeps plz......................

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Voted For: Yvonne

I'ma brake it down....

This:
like bent dicks this banana's punches are loosin aims
chains would wrap ur neck after a show cos u lockin ur game
you cant spit bitch,u just here to roll balls like ur avy
you'ld shoot urself if you were hustlin in war in the amy (army)
from grafix to battlin..who wunt tell u mistakin i-dentity?
i looked at the cypher and u dropped 3..u sample null-entity
dis wigga cant hold a mic,if he could stone wud b crawling
you just a pure bitch like fox,your verse shows how you fallin
i'ld go bak to drawin if i were u dj..cos u got it twisted
you dragin ur hairs thinkin its fun..when ur wackness is listed

Vs....

imma stomp you out like i do my rugs ...
this kid wanna play you can play wit slugs
cuz i got a 9 wit the scope one shot gon have
ya ass thinking you da pope this kid real hood
you could say im dope ..imma dot ya eye then
imma cross the t's..this bitch laying in the grave
still on her knee's

That ^

Yvonne wins, what more can i say?

































Nah, i'll explain it a little better so it doesnt get removed.

Yvonne, ya had everythin this banana character didnt.

Banana kid....
Ya verse lacked oersonals, had little to no punchlines, and i just wasnt feeling your verse an i dont think anybody would deny that..Yvonne gets the win.

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Voted For: Yvonne

BANANAZ - your punches were ok, you had nothing even remotely personal, waaay too basic everywhere...no wordplay really and your vocab was borrrrrring...elevate

Yvonne - you had some nice punches, your personals won it really...plus u had some nice vocab...keep writin

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Voted For: Yvonne

imma stomp you out like i do my rugs ...
this kid wanna play you can play wit slugs
^^^No Weak to basic
cuz i got a 9 wit the scope one shot gon have
ya ass thinking you da pope this kid real hood
^^^Didnt even rhyme
you could say im dope ..imma dot ya eye then
imma cross the t's..this bitch laying in the grave
still on her knee's
^^^No Weak...

like bent dicks this banana's punches are loosin aims
chains would wrap ur neck after a show cos u lockin ur game
^^^Good Personal for the Opener
you cant spit bitch,u just here to roll balls like ur avy
you'ld shoot urself if you were hustlin in war in the amy (army)
^^^Good punch an personal
from grafix to battlin..who wunt tell u mistakin i-dentity?
i looked at the cypher and u dropped 3..u sample null-entity
^^^Nice punch
dis wigga cant hold a mic,if he could stone wud b crawling
you just a pure bitch like fox,your verse shows how you fallin
^^^Ight...not as hard hittin
i'ld go bak to drawin if i were u dj..cos u got it twisted
you dragin ur hairs thinkin its fun..when ur wackness is listed
^^^ight
V/Yvonne this was a one sided battle....yvonne came wit some good punchs that were consistent wit personals an some wordplay also good structure...Dj u came weak u need to elavate some ur punchs didnt even rhyme....No hate Work on that.....RTF OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED

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thanx....but drop a link so i can vote???????????????

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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=205888
^^^
here

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