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Old 03-27-06, 11:48 PM   #1
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How Im Feeling

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Its Been Awhile Since I Been Here But I Think I Might Be Back But Who Knows I Could Be Gone Tommorow Anyways Heres Somthin I Wrote

Money Dont Grow On Trees Yet Its The Root Of All Evil
Its Funny Making Money Is The Soul Goal For Most People
Just Wanna be Succsesful Never Helpful Its Crazy Man
Amazingly Im Still Able To Write With Two Lazy Hands
They Say I Paint Pictures With Words But Im Hearin A Blank
Im Takin In All There 2 Cents, Storin Em In My Memory Bank
Wasnt Meant To Make It Guess Ima Damiond In The Ruff
Its Time To Be Tuff, Dont Need A Girl Hip Hops My Love
Feels Like Yall Skippen Rocks Arcoss The River I Cryed
Tryed To Brain Storm But My Heads Filled With Clear Skys
No More Teared Eyes, Other Guys Is Actin Lies
I Havent Got Any Answers So Im Done Askin Why
Im On The Right Track But To Slow For This Fast Race
And After All The Steps I Make I Still Come In Last Place
I Guess Thats The Price I Pay For Bein The Nice Guy
Practice Makes Perfect But Nobodys Perfect Why Try
Strive For Perfection, Grab For Something We Cant Reach
Its Myself Vs Me, Either Way Im Just Goin To Get Beat
Tryin To Balance Music, School, And My Life
My Shadows The Onlything Beside Me So Im Lonley At Night
Layin Alone, I Conversate Between My Mind And My Heart
They Argue But My Soul Intervens Everytime That They Start
Trying To Reach The Destiny Of My Dreams, By Sleep Walkin
I Speak In My Sleep, Dont Wake me Up Let me Keep Talkin
Let Me Keep Thinkin Let Me Keep Happyness In My Dreams
I Hate Reality Thats Why I Keep Rappin These Things
Cause I Become What i Want When I Write Songs And Poems
And I Know I Cant Give Up As Long As A Flow Em

Leave me Some Feed Please
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Old 03-28-06, 12:08 AM   #2
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damn you still have the touch man........nice creativity man, emotion and flow man...nice keep doing ur thing homes.........................i rate thi 8/10


nice flow to the concept!
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Old 03-28-06, 09:27 PM   #3
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Thanks For The Feed Homie, Hit Me Up With Somemore Please
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Old 03-28-06, 10:58 PM   #4
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hecks ya. This was nice and creative. And Deep as shit. Keep up the good work folk. 8.5/10

Everything was on point.
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Old 03-28-06, 11:00 PM   #5
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RTF OM in my sig plz.
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Old 03-28-06, 11:05 PM   #6
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Werd... Thanks For The Feed Homie And I Rtf Already...Uppin For Some More Feed
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Old 03-29-06, 07:13 PM   #7
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Come On Uppin For Some More Feed Ill Rtf
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Old 03-30-06, 12:09 AM   #8
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hey this shit was raw had goose pumps racing up my arms like the rapids this shit was deep and just all there for me straight up pictured what you where trying to tell ppl good work and keep it up
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Old 04-01-06, 12:31 AM   #9
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Thanks For The Feedback Homie

Uppin For More Please
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Old 04-02-06, 11:58 AM   #10
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Uppin For Some God Damn Feed Back Please
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Old 04-08-06, 11:40 AM   #11
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Old 04-12-06, 06:05 PM   #12
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This was beautiful. The flow complimented the piece perfectly. Imagery, emotion, and metaphors were all there. My fav line:

Feels Like Yall Skippen Rocks Arcoss The River I Cryed
Tryed To Brain Storm But My Heads Filled With Clear Skys

Real good. I'd nominate it. Peace.
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Old 04-13-06, 01:21 PM   #13
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word. nice piece, really liked the opener. u had some emotion in there which it is always important to throw some in there for any piece. really creative. word up and return the favor on any of my 2 oms.
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Old 04-14-06, 01:27 PM   #14
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Thanks For The Feed Homies And Yea It Would Be Awsome If You Did Nominate It
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Old 04-14-06, 10:00 PM   #15
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