listen...

Lyrically my brain is twisted, disfigured, insane, and wicked
Became a witness to my own life before i came to existence
Creatin miracles not spiritual im changin flames to liquid
Never weighed alot but i can take a train and flip it
My brain design is the highest of all minds
So high and advanced i got Allah bitin my rhymes
Known to rip since the beginning of time
My mind so advanced im the one that was teaching Einstein
Never quiet i get mad and cause more damage than a riot
Fast as hell evaporate your tears before you cried it
Cold enough to bring the cold before winder could supply t
Yet hot enough to hold chicken for 5 seconds and fry it
Ya waistin ya time chasin keno speed is steady blazin
I can scream cheese and move before the pictures takin
My society stay secret like Illuminati and the FreeMasons
Hellish lyrics when i flow satan was one of my patients
Seemly souls i confiscate and make spirits evacuate
A cool nigga but hot enough to make lava evaporate
When my rage set in im known to blow that K weapon
At age seven i thought up the blueprint that made heaven
Physically if you aint feelin me then you feelin me spiritually
A beast in me when i flow so lyrically

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omg son
wow, u jus took my words dawg, first time on dis site i hav seen a REAL nigga spit kyrical shit that i would i wanna say i spit
yo, lemme hav dis verse dawg, shit was super hot, i might bite dis
i cant give it a rating cuz its not a song but its def. my fav. piece on dis entire site
holla bacc

lmao. thats soooo gonna be on your next battle and used against you. wow. dont post that kinda stuff, kid.

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wat is u talk'n bout nigga, i dont giv a fuck about dis internet shit, if i like it, i like it nigga, it aint like u can spit

lol thanks for the feed, uppin for more

Damn Lots Of Braggin On This But I Would've Like To Have Seen More Multi-rhyming Keep On Repping And Add Multi's Next Time

This Shit Was Aight, Whats Up With This Dick Rider Mic Young Though? Soundin Like You Paid The Muthafucka To Overhype Your Piece. Aint Nobody On Anyones Dick That Hard, Especially Just Over A Average Verse Like This. This Shit Was Good But Nottin Amazing.

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Preciate the feed

not bad, some simple lines in there and the concept has sort of been done before, but still. it wasnt bad, flowed well at times and shit, kept it simple, which isnt a bad thing always.. only prob was I felt you could have used a more complicated rhyme scheme, the one you used was too simple and made this a boring read. but keep dropping man.

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this should really be in freestyles. has no point being in open mic being that ur just spittin a bunch of multies. it wasnt really that good. but it wasnt bad. keep it up.

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im so ill that cancer thinks im its father.

nice flow steady structure niceness