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Old 02-03-04, 01:20 PM   #1
Machavelli
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Machavelli VS. Jamil

IP: D38E 499D

10-15 lines (1 verse)
30 min to spit
no crew votes
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blind spits
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Old 02-03-04, 01:45 PM   #2
Jamil
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Listen up son I’m gonna make you look stupid,
Callin yaself that im’gonna shoot on u like cupid,
U dumb fuck, with me ya battling the best,
Cant beat me I have talent cos im blessed,
If u read on my lyrics will make u depressed,
Make ya commit suicide cos u aint got it goin on,
Then u look at Jamil in envy cos u know that he’s the Don,
Look at yaself,are you ever gonna fuck?
No,cos ppl don’t like the ugly look,
I make u look childish go and colour in a book,
Ya momma the bitch charges2much 4a suck,
See ur a newbie like me,but im goin straight to the top,
Ur just a Vanilla Ice cos u know u gonna flop.
Read my lyrics and understand im the king,
U aint rite 4rap,maybe pop,you’d b better off tryna sing
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Old 02-03-04, 02:48 PM   #3
Machavelli
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Jamil callin me ugly when he's probably a fat mother fucker/
i ain't going to lower myself to you as a little buster/
when you cluster and cave in// your going to start cryin
cause you gave in// you were afraid you would lose to some other newbie/
but really a true G out of me is all you'll see/
and ashes to ashes as you lie down in your grave/
your life was based on slacking cause you wasn't even brave/
that's what i say and if you think your gonna fuck with me/
just think twice when it's starts to be difficult for you to breath//
and your every move is such a scary step/
cause i get closer to you and you see death//
and each breath is something you don't want to feel/
your licking your wound from this battle before you start to heal//
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Old 02-03-04, 03:07 PM   #4
Machavelli
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were through with this battle just start the voting!!
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Old 02-04-04, 07:41 AM   #5
JamesJr.
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Jamil:
Punch Lines:?/10
Structure:5/10 (lengthening the bars)
(Wordplay)Vocab:4/10
Flow:5/10


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Machaveli:
Punches:?/10
Structure:6/10 (lengthening the bars)
(Wordpaly)Vocab:4/10 ( needs uped)
Flow:7/10



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Based on that I have to go with Machaveli
It was a close battle and BOTH need to elevate!


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I can't official vote yet but an "HONEST OPINION"


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