Eyo dis sum shit i came up wit wen i was thinkin sum heavy shit....but notice how flick multies..i think its aight let me know what ya'll think

Eyo, as i analyze this pad i know my self as king
This life that we lead got our brains all insane
but i hold my head up, while starin at tha rain
got me thinkin life and death game is all tha same
while u on earth ur birth is determined by pain
black on black crime continues shit aint never gon change
instead ur influenced ur success depends on bling
how well ur mind set it dont matter to them
the only options left kill ni99as or sling
but im a smart boy in my heart immo win
ready to sin
waitin 4 da thing immo bring
gotta distort my mind so the answer is gin
tha pain within
strikes like a bottomless pin
watin 4 my 5 mics so i sit on a grin
smarter than him
coz rap got me rockin a timb
fuzzy white wit a leather black rim
it aint gon end! huh

it doesnt rhyme

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Fuck this will a peer cat i totally got what u were sayin and it did rhyme when u are good and know how to spit it. I liked it man it was mad deep. It doesnt seem like something u thought out either that shit was good. If u wanna battle hit me up sometime and check out the link.

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actually it doesnt but everything else was nice and fuck u dumbass

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U must not really know shit mad cats in the game rhyme shit like that. I do, all my boys do, and we are considered good. If that aint enough for ya check this shit

I blew breath for you midgets, I gave life to the game
It's only right I got the right to be king
Niggaz that got life really like what I sing
Cause they know is he really like, niggaz feel my pain

Same kind of style and Jigga did this so learn something bitch before u speak

yo why all these niggas always trina talk shit to C.S. niggas......


yo will a peer fuck that nigga killwhateva yo dont pay attention to him.......

he aint never killed shit.......

U cant diss me man u got that Pac quote wrong so i know u aint as deep as me fuck your punk ass. See my rhymes and tell me i aint killed shit. Pussy

nigga what you know about killin' shit nigga.....

you probably some suburb white boy thats trina be cool in your area so you just picked up a rap CD one day........

now you think you gangsta or some shit............

and i aint got know problem with white boys i just hate niggas trina act gangsta when they dont know what its really about......

first off man i aint no gangsta but i been rappin since i was 7 i would straight EAT you and thats no lie. Quit bullshittin cuz i caught u on gettin the vote wrong bitch.

A gangsta is what a pussy calls himself to make him sound hard. Youre a bitch. Tryin to act all hot with the quote but u got it wrong dont talk shit to me

what the fuck r u talkin bout some fuckin' vote ya stupid bitch.....

i dont even know what u talki' bout.....

The quote u dumb bitch u aint even got it right the Pac quote i know more about this shit than u ever will. Fuck u princess gambino

nigga you just mad cause i gussed what your life was like and i was porbably wright.......

and nigga you dont know what rap's about nigga do you even know what it stands for bitch.......

and heres my question for you when you spit who's life do you really talk about....


cause it aint yours.......