uppin on this...personally i think its one of my best so type some more feed ya'll

truly dope bruh!

even better than ur other peice i see. Proper entertaining and killing a lot of open mics i read.

Funny as hell, nice start about the jacuzzi and i like the chorus, was hella good.

I want to hook up wiv u man for a collab. i can learn something i think.
wat you say?

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uppin more on this shit......

yo i'm uppin this shit like a muthafucka

uppin.............

yo i need some feed yo

Uppin Any On Every Single Peep From Peepville Ta Peep My Shit So I Could Say It Was Peeped By Peeps Cuz It'll Be Bad If No Peeps Peep My Shit Thats Out Ta Peep If No Peeps Peep It Then I Got No Peeped Shit From Peeps I Need Peeps Ta Peep My Shit So They Could Tell Me What The Peeps Peeped If There Was No Peeps This Site'll Be Peepless And If It's Peepless Then No Peeps Will Put Out Shit Ta Peep Cuz There's No Peeps Ta Peep It So C'mon Peeps Peep This Shit And Type What U Peeped

dat was hella raw. i like da fact yo rap was fun. alot of niggas post sad stuff about people dying and them tring to find their personality or some gay stuff. this was different and i like dat. 9/10

yo check out my thread when you get a chance
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=183244

yo thanx for the feed yo i'll make sure ta return the favor i respect everyone's style of rap and and how they spit it but u rite cant just be mad or sad all the time u gotta spit some interesting shit that'll make people laugh so i spit a lil bit of both so everybody could feel me

uppin some more

dis was a good piece didnt expect dis from you cus i neva seen non of your work but it was a good piece u could up yo vocab a lil structure was ok some lines seemed a lil bit streched but overall it was good 8.5/10

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hahahahaha i loved it just str8 freestyling nice shit good punches good vocab
lmao loving it chea good job homie

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thanx transcrpt...uppin some more