deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
30 line max.

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

check
its on

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Check.....a rematch already.......just to let you know, I plan to skull drag you this time.

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It's over......

Kingz, your reign is over...you're in the eye of the storm
This champ is publicly fucked...now he can rely on his porn
I'll put you over my knee and leave your ass abused
Win?.....C'mon....seems like he already plans to lose
Personals about your crew?...yeah I could send a bunch
But I could type like this and you still wouldn't get the punch
Lets face it, I’m diss regarded while you’re just plain old disregarded
He’s bout to drop some hot shit…my mistake, the kid just farted
I’m known for the jack of hearts…..I’ll take you life with my pen
And you could be the king of clubs……with a knife in your head
Or I could run up in your spot…..with two guns a blazing
And you’ll be screaming JESUS CHRIST when I bring your crew suffocation
And what the fuck did you Blueprint? There's no need to conceal it
A crew with Kingz and a Jack., no wonder they're easy to deal wit
Kingz battles like he fucks……..he just ain’t up to it
Cause like your crew predicts…...dawg, you just blue it

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Personals about your crew?...yeah I could send a bunch
But I could type like this and you still wouldn't get the punch
^ Very Clever . .
Awaits for kings.

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S-Own Squod
RB Text Tourney Finalist
Orginal Relaunched Member.
Password Aka The Masked
2nd Moderator on Rapverse Ever
Not quite legendary yet....

you say your 'gangstarr'..but ya 'skillz' got me in disbelief
as ya avatar shows...ya got ya mum handling ya beef
this aint an 'Enigma'...you aint no 'man of mystery'
your punches go no 'powers'...they jus dont do shit to me
u jus started audio...but ya 'hot shit' has never been heard
i'll disorientate you son...leaving your deadly visionz blurred
u aint earning cash money...you need a 'buc'...so go south
like Luda ya reputation came from...ya own 'word of mouf'
check his propaganda...like Rakim says he's got lots of 'soul'
i'll leave ya 'mind and body' in paralysis...you've jus lost all control
this is the second time i have had to murder you..its getting old
like ya mum in ya avatar...but i believe thats already been told (line 2)
its played...jus like ya wholse verse...like you sed 'its over'
i've beat ya...like roc did nas
....so jus call me J Hova

Blueprint Baby

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you say your 'gangstarr'..but ya 'skillz' got me in disbelief
as ya avatar shows...ya got ya mum handling ya beef
LMAO . .
I honestly thought kingz won . .
but
no - show . . .
You posted on friday.

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S-Own Squod
RB Text Tourney Finalist
Orginal Relaunched Member.
Password Aka The Masked
2nd Moderator on Rapverse Ever
Not quite legendary yet....

i had my verse dun but my comp didnt work - the internet wudnt work, it cudnt be helped. i was like 10 hours late, u can let off surely?

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Kingz, your reign is over...you're in the eye of the storm
This champ is publicly fucked...now he can rely on his porn
7...nice opener, gud punch but pretty basic vocab.
I'll put you over my knee and leave your ass abused
Win?.....C'mon....seems like he already plans to lose
7...gud line, nice meta in the first line.
Personals about your crew?...yeah I could send a bunch
But I could type like this and you still wouldn't get the punch
6...average punch, wasn't really a strong diss.
Lets face it, I’m diss regarded while you’re just plain old disregarded
He’s bout to drop some hot shit…my mistake, the kid just farted
8...LMFAO!! Funny shit man funny shit!!
I’m known for the jack of hearts…..I’ll take you life with my pen
And you could be the king of clubs……with a knife in your head
6...not really gud, pretty basic i think.
Or I could run up in your spot…..with two guns a blazing
And you’ll be screaming JESUS CHRIST when I bring your crew suffocation
7...nice punch, pretty average vocabs.
And what the fuck did you Blueprint? There's no need to conceal it
A crew with Kingz and a Jack., no wonder they're easy to deal wit
9...SICK!! Best line u spit straight up!!
Kingz battles like he fucks……..he just ain’t up to it
Cause like your crew predicts…...dawg, you just blue it
6...pretty weak closer!!


you say your 'gangstarr'..but ya 'skillz' got me in disbelief
as ya avatar shows...ya got ya mum handling ya beef
9...LMFAO!! Funny as hell, one sick ass opener!!
this aint an 'Enigma'...you aint no 'man of mystery'
your punches go no 'powers'...they jus dont do shit to me
7...aight punch, first line was better i think.
u jus started audio...but ya 'hot shit' has never been heard
i'll disorientate you son...leaving your deadly visionz blurred
7...nice punch again, pretty good personal Kingz.
u aint earning cash money...you need a 'buc'...so go south
like Luda ya reputation came from...ya own 'word of mouf'
7...gud punch again, nice wordplay in there.
check his propaganda...like Rakim says he's got lots of 'soul'
i'll leave ya 'mind and body' in paralysis...you've jus lost all control
6...pretty weak compared to ure other lines man!!
this is the second time i have had to murder you..its getting old
like ya mum in ya avatar...but i believe thats already been told (line 2)
7...nice punch, liked the way u linked back to the beginning!!
its played...jus like ya wholse verse...like you sed 'its over'
i've beat ya...like roc did nas
....so jus call me J Hova
7...nice closer, nowhere near as good as ure opener tho!!


POINTS TOTALS

enygma - 56/80 70%
Kingz - 50/70 71%

V/ - Kingz...just edged it!!

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wtf?^
Engyma got this one
I felt came decent, but often to corny or played
engyma, I have to say, beat him..rather cleverly
The Blueprint line was dopeness

v/engyma

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R.I.P. Bodie

Doesn't really matter when he posted his verse.....lets go with the votes.....Ohh, by the way, If you looked at my avatar you would see that it is a man cooking on the grill. It was a pretty clever punch (the only one), but why use it twice?

Kingz - 1
Enygma - 1

*not to self....If I lose, bitch about the late drop*

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shouldnt it be note*, and not not?

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R.I.P. Bodie

It was really just a joke.....I don't really care when he dropped. It is kinda suspicious that he always waits 'til the last minute probably trying to fix his verse of look for better personals or whatever.....I'm pretty confident that his verse was garbage and everyone will see it....

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His verse was garbage, and the avatar is a dude handling burgers. Kinda ruined the punch for me, although it was still pretty nice the first time. not the second time. rest of verse = crap. no real nice punches, no wordplay or nice metas.

enygma had a couple nice concepts and some good punches. the blue print line.. i really liked the concept and wanted the punch to be nice, but the wording let it down. it was nice, but could have really won this easily for you. then you kinda grasped with your first card wordplay diss:

"
I’m known for the jack of hearts…..I’ll take you life with my pen
And you could be the king of clubs……with a knife in your head"

^ boo-urns.

"
And what the fuck did you Blueprint? There's no need to conceal it
A crew with Kingz and a Jack., no wonder they're easy to deal wit"

^ far better.

your closer was pretty decent.

enygma wins hands down for better wordplay and punches.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!