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Old 10-12-06, 12:33 PM   #1
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!!!

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yo, im sittin here writin so i can become good
i mean growing up in the hood,its hard but i no i could
succeed in rap,no matter what trap, i get into
just no i dont quit, u should have been knew
but for now ive been rapping for three days
but i still got alot of obstacles in my way
i wont back down as long as im breathin
nigga i wont fall cuz i keep feedin
my brain, wit whole grain
even when im in a train
people will no my name
im not gonna leave the game
cuz im not like yall, im not lame
but this aint the first time, i left the game
back then i left the game and i felt ashamed
back then i was cheap
i always thought rapping was like takin a big leap
but i was wrong
now im back and im strong
this time im going through it and im not turning back
i no its hard but ima try to make my own track
too many people doubt me
but they dont no nuttin about me
sometimes i can be inadequet
but this time i dont give shit
its changed this year
im gonna make it without fear, and show these muderfuckers wat J-360 can do here!!!
xxx
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Old 10-12-06, 01:13 PM   #2
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That waz Iight but Im still waiting for you to make a come back to me!
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Old 10-12-06, 01:13 PM   #3
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And Hurry tha fuck up tha battles over in two days
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Old 10-12-06, 01:26 PM   #4
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it was hot but im betta bitch
 
Old 10-12-06, 02:11 PM   #5
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yah little niggas pickin on my nigga j-360
yah think yah niggas good then why dont yah go at me
imma crazy dude
dont give me an attitude
i aint tryin to be rude
smack you horizontally then latitude
im comin at you
show yah what i do
im here to give the news
right now..yah niggas lose
lets see u step up to my game
imma make yah feel ashame
and it will be u to blame
cause yah lost to who?...yea nigga say the name
 
Old 10-15-06, 04:05 PM   #6
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Old 10-15-06, 06:53 PM   #7
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ight ima give u advice and u could take it or u could leave it
first off....dont front and dont write shit u think people wanna hear
right what YOU wanna hear and dont give a fuck bout anybody else

2nd off..if u black then ok..if u latino or mexican or whatever then ok
but if u white PLEASE do not and i say again PLEASE DO NOT
say "nigga" in any of ur rhymes or anything cuz u'll regret it
and it just makes u seem 50% more fake bout ur shit

3rd off: stay away from small words that is preschool
look at they example im bout ta show u and tell me what u like better

"i sound bad cuz i just started ta rap
right now im sad cuz i sound like crap"

or

"i leave rhymes thats intriguing thats why i flaunt it
i leave the churches preaching cuz im on that god shit"

which would u rather hear???

start droppin some of that real shit and i gurantee
that you'll get more feed from people that just aint under 50 posts
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