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07-30-05, 08:50 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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Thin Line Between Love & Hate Pt 1 ft.Black Queen
IP: FFBA C081
*Hellllo..Im not Able 2 Answer My Phone..Leave A Message* *Look Listen* Seems like Last November everything was So Somber But You stayin Out Late Nights Puts my Mind 2 Ponder On Whether Or Not..You Must Think My Love is a Joke? Shit I fell In Deep Passion With u..The Moment u Spoke The Way you use to Embrace My Face..The Way u Taste Seems All Gone Now.Im finding Otha Cell #'s Damnit Dont Lie to Me...Are u Trying 2 Replace my Place? Now your Trying Out 2 Socially Enhance your Own Endevers IM THE 1 Remember who gave u your 1st Orgasmic Pleasures Let me Guess Girl..........Do i not Satisfy your Every Need? Do i not Arrive on time and Cater to your every single Plead But you Know what..If you Want Em ..Shit Go right Ahead IM THE 1 for u Remember.Those Lies Huh?Thats wha u Said DAMNIT BITCH!!....Fuck this....No Please Excuse my French But you are To Me.......Just As Stifflers Mom was to Finch Now i Lay Here Day Dreaming..... Thinking About our Past I FUCKIN HATE YOU BITCH.....but Yet i Still Love your Ass Fuck.........*Hangs Up Phone* *Phone Rings* *Hello*..........*Wha the Fuck do u Want* *Black Queen* Time comes and time goes, where have the time between us gone Its like we not even together because it seems like you always gone And it hurt me so deep inside to have this thought goin through my mind That theres someone else that im not the only one that be on ya mind I dont wanna have this thought but you dont give me any choice it hurt Comin in at 5 in the mourin boy you jus gotta kno i kno you not at work And there always these phone calls that wen i answer they hang up Afta dat your cellphone rings you leave the room you kno dats fucked up And we have these crazy arguements its like you jus pushin me away Its funny cus it gets like dat rite afta i ask you wat bitch u fuck today And of course you're gonna deny my allegations of you cheating And i really dont want to feel like me and dis otha girl competing But im tryin to delete these thoughts because i just love you so much And wen we and we are makin love it feel so right wen we touch Me breathing in ya ear while you on top of me how i love it so much But we are starting to fall apart o how much i miss ya soft touch Afta all of this doe i try but i jus cant see myself at all leaving you You my knight and the only person i eva love that much is so true But i guess i gotta live with this thought because ill neva kno the truth There's no use in worryin about it because i jus cant see myself without you *So What Do we Do Now?*
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07-30-05, 09:02 PM
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Drop a link homie or this will be closed
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07-30-05, 09:12 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: FFBA C081
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07-30-05, 10:09 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: A0FF 939B
Man this was deep as hell I loved every line in this entire OM both yall did your thing this is a great drop probably the best I've seen in a while I really liked the imagination on how your girl was cheatin on you and your girl thinkin you was cheatin on her its a crazy story this a 9.5/10 rtf "Grand Finale"
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07-30-05, 10:30 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
*title reminds me on an iron maiden song
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07-30-05, 10:37 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: FFBA C081
Thanx 4 the Love...and lol @ Iron Maiden
if ya feelin it so much...wont hurt 2 Nominate it
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07-30-05, 10:49 PM
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-Not On My Level-
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IP: 4EF2 67C8
tight as hell....i loved this shit...nice imagery and vocab.......keep doing ur thing ppl....9/10....
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07-30-05, 10:50 PM
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Do Re Mi
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IP: F972 0E70
nice OM .. liked troops verse little better thans BQ her baars seemed to be stretched didnt flow as nicely .. but both was deep and i liked the overall topic of the peice
troops verse- 8.5/10 Black queen's - 7/10 overall like a 7.5 - 8 / 10 hot shit.. return tha favor on this OM id appreciate it http://community.rapverse.com/showt...2323&styleid=14
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07-30-05, 10:55 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: FFBA C081
Preciate the Love ya....got damn ^^Yo Avy Scares Me
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07-31-05, 01:07 AM
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Classic
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IP: 72C3 F597
thx errybody fo da feed
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07-31-05, 01:27 AM
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Ill Nigga Alert.
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IP: 28AD 5545
Dayum...this was a nice piece...Good topic and concept...It was pretty deep...Also it had good vocab...And had good imagery...But overall-8.5/10...Both you collab very well too...Keep up the good work...
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07-31-05, 02:09 PM
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Classic
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IP: 0825 899A
thx fo da feed wicked
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07-31-05, 05:23 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: CF74 5D3A
my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202384) drop a rhyme or critique
Obscene nerds are like European birds they don’t fly high or touch the sky like Red man and Meth did, hell I wing strong with bling on, deprived of fame still alive with name go through jive so lame shot at by glocks and gats got holes in my hat and like FIFTY CENTS Got shot nine times while at the candy shop licking a lollipop damn! Now that pissed me off Last edited by MADDRAPPER : 07-31-05 at 05:27 PM. Reason: add link |
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07-31-05, 07:09 PM
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Classic
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IP: 0825 899A
^^^stop postin ya whack rhymes in here
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07-31-05, 07:53 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: CF74 5D3A
black queen your verse is weak firsr off it don't rhyme enough plus what are you doing rhyming the same words show lack of skill
2. you have to learn to write in first person dang girl you let no attitude out in this rhyme at all in rap i'll have to rate your verse 2/10 impossible to rap this with any succession |
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