diverse
Without a fee i'll leave this kids face filled with nix and cuts
Thought i was battling someone good, must've mixed em up
setup was wack as fuck, 5/10

Phoenix legendary? cuz he can resurrect himself from his ashes
But a dust pan, broom and fire place would take care of him fastest
lol, you wording let you down, 6/10

Groveling at my feet, always pulling my leg for a quick battle Peasant
Bird of prey? better get on your knees and worship when i'm present
pretty played, 5/10

Just wait until our verses parallel, gone in a flash of mass destruction
Foenix gets an F because he was shunned to silence in class discussion
bad wording let you down again, 5/10

He tries to act hungry, i'd give em bird seed but his rule states no feeding
So in a flash, he takes his last gasp from lack of eating, moments fleeting
prety wack, 4/10

Unlike his memories of the past,badly lashed back from severe beating
Maybe next time you won't be so blind when u spit, cuz seeing is believing
nice closer, 7/10


overall 32/60




phoenix
Elite now diversified wit the addition of this diverse kid
Now its split with kids who earned it...
...and herbs like him who don't fucking deserve it
not too bad, 5/10

You're worthless...and i'm just being earnest when i say...
You'll never get in for battling cuz...
...even E letting you in topical was a mistake
okay, bad wording, 5/10

Ya last collab was horrible...whole love story seemed fake...
So lemme give you new inspiration...
...by beating your chest till your heart breaks
i didnt like this one, 4.10

I carve veins and scar face...i always strike perfect
But if this kids a bitch, he's even easier to hit...
...I just aim between his tits
was very forced, 4/10

Kid claims diverse? You liar...ya name makes me laugh
Cuz your only attempted weapon's text...
...you're even horrible at that
hardly hit, 4/10

It's ironic, I'm on my 11th, sep i already devoured the kid
And ya shitty verse crashed to the ground
...harder than the fucking twin towers did
pretty played, 5/10


overall 27/60


i expected this to be a lot better than it was.


plz drop an honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114633

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