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Old 01-01-05, 03:39 PM   #1
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Cuban~Storm Vs. Denied Truth

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Old 01-02-05, 03:45 PM   #2
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Jus Incredible Lyrics

-What God Has For Me..Is Meant For Me.

II COR. 12:9
And He Said To Me, "My Grace Is Sufficient For You, For My Strength Is Made Perfect In Weakness." Therefore, I Will Rather Most Gladly Boast In My Infirmities, So That The Power Of God May Rest Upon Me.
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Old 01-02-05, 10:41 PM   #3
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Old 01-04-05, 09:36 PM   #4
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Famine

An empty pit in my stomach, blood rushes into my head
Hunger has once done it, still here wishing I was dead
Easy come easy go, life is just like a soon to be lost friend
Cuz nothing I could do but rest, cuz time’s ticking to an end
All alone in the wilderness hearing growls from afar
Scared to death cuz I don’t know what or who they are
But after time goes by I realize that it’s my stomach
Days wit out food, still standing, I don’t know how I done it
Walking throughout the forest loosing my breath
Energy is fading, still thinking...knowing I rather choose death
But such a great famine, day by day I know this will be no more
God damn it, what is this...what a smell...I see a house wit a open door
Walking to it I see total darkness, pitch black then I see nothing more
Den a shatter dream disturbed by an awoken truth that I was poor
Still laying knowing that my hunger will be everlasting
Cuz this is not just a hunger out of food but a dream that will neva happen
But physically and emotionally will always disturb me
And after death is the only time people now heard me
A hunger is defiantly more disturbing when is something you always dwelt wit
But a dream chased is a dream waiting for but I’m just a orphan that can’t help it

My bad had a typo on the first one with the center codes...flow please delete the first verse I wrote
 
Old 01-06-05, 10:47 PM   #5
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Ain't Jus A Physical Thing
<center>Death of mind, body, and spirit..the hunger within...
cravin a Bible..a book..food...the views of other men...
the famine has taken all..family...foes..and friends..
it has mentally withdrawn me from the way i've been...
i can't stand the famine..as it paralyzes our land...
Its given name being...Death O. Mann.....
and its mission is simple...to kill, steal and destroyy...
with no food in my body...life is like a toy..
its played with...and thought about..and missed so dear...
and the pain of a famine..brings my death so near...
the people i loved have gone before...
now the perish they knew i may not ignore...
with me opening the door..and allowing the famine in...
i have failed in life...now this game must end...
the famine takes all...why should I be different...
the thought of starvation..makes my life relinquished...
so with bold terror..i make da famine dimenish..
i grab a book..a Bible...and food for the people...
and the life of the men..are now rekindled...
Becuz famine and Relieve ain't just physical..its mental...</center>
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II COR. 12:9
And He Said To Me, "My Grace Is Sufficient For You, For My Strength Is Made Perfect In Weakness." Therefore, I Will Rather Most Gladly Boast In My Infirmities, So That The Power Of God May Rest Upon Me.
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Old 01-06-05, 11:07 PM   #6
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-What God Has For Me..Is Meant For Me.

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Old 01-07-05, 01:08 AM   #7
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denied truth you dropped your verse past the deadline

Cuban~storm wins by no-show

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