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03-18-06, 05:42 PM | #1 | |
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Closes his eyes, gulps three times;
tries to lose his sight as the light pries through loops and writes lines along side the wide end of his noose, as he resumes a fast descent through the brain's metal chutes again ....... to conclude in hallucinogens. Favorite lines. I like the picture you painted. Your wordage is what made this rhymes get my attention. The metaphors were soild which made the flow fluid. Stay sharp http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224392
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