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06-22-08, 11:44 PM | #1 | |||||
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Flight ( 3 ) vs. Format ( 2 )
IP: EBB4 6039
Due times:
Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST. - if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes. Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific. Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late. Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent. Line limits: 10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and no max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts. Goodluck.
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06-23-08, 09:15 AM | #2 | |||
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IP: 90B9 B5A3
yea
im droppin on tuesday so if you could do the same then that'd be cool
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06-23-08, 06:06 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 9E12 3286
i'll go 12 whenever i can, try for tues though.
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06-23-08, 06:24 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 90B9 B5A3
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it sucks im facin this wack fuck bitch geek well lay, i guess im not droppin with the best of them this week fli's gon die quick here in the present this flight's more doomed than those on september 11th peeps sometimes get stuck, n it aint fun to grind writers block is like your good lines - nothin comes to mind i snap my fingers n his girl comes runnin, im hittin it slower shes like a tape deck.. one click 'n im flippin her over f's name is ironic, n this shouldnt check as a shock ima call him flight of stairs.. cos im walkin all over him to get to the top
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06-25-08, 06:08 PM | #5 | |||||
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IP: 9E12 3286
fuck this bitch, get real, nobody's callin' you the best
cause the last few weeks all you did was prove you can DROP with those heads read the mag, they're cheering for me, but i'll let you in on the fun i'll have everyone screamin "FORRR!"... they know i'm about to shoot a hole in one fuck this piece of shit, he gets walked on more than floor mats i thought he was an editor... everyboyds sayin' 'where's the decent form,at?' see i'm a pimp, a playa... while form has nothing but weak lines i got a cam show from his girl last night... then she turned him down in real life so fuck you, your punches... mine are harder, bigger and greater cause the truth is i've seen better form... from retarded figure skaters
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06-25-08, 06:23 PM | #6 | |||||
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IP: EBB4 6039
I'll be the first to feed this..good shit guys.
it sucks im facin this wack fuck bitch geek well lay, i guess im not droppin with the best of them this week decent. fli's gon die quick here in the present this flight's more doomed than those on september 11th good concept. worded poorly. peeps sometimes get stuck, n it aint fun to grind writers block is like your good lines - nothin comes to mind okay. i snap my fingers n his girl comes runnin, im hittin it slower shes like a tape deck.. one click 'n im flippin her over lol k. f's name is ironic, n this shouldnt check as a shock ima call him flight of stairs.. cos im walkin all over him to get to the top sick. vs fuck this bitch, get real, nobody's callin' you the best cause the last few weeks all you did was prove you can DROP with those heads good. read the mag, they're cheering for me, but i'll let you in on the fun i'll have everyone screamin "FORRR!"... they know i'm about to shoot a hole in one dope. fuck this piece of shit, he gets walked on more than floor mats i thought he was an editor... everyboyds sayin' 'where's the decent form,at?' okay. see i'm a pimp, a playa... while form has nothing but weak lines i got a cam show from his girl last night... then she turned him down in real life eh. so fuck you, your punches... mine are harder, bigger and greater cause the truth is i've seen better form... from retarded figure skaters na wasn't feelin this one. This battle is close as shit..I want some more people to vote an leave some feed on this. In my opinion I think Form pulled this one out with a tad more consistency. It actually came down to quotables. Forms closer was sick..an so was Flights FOR line..thats was dope. There openers were both good. Flight kinda flipped forms concept lol.. but I think Flight started off really strong,..then kinda fell off toward the end. I want to see some more votes an get other peoples opinions. v/Format
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06-25-08, 06:45 PM | #7 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: 9244 687A
it sucks im facin this wack fuck bitch geek
well lay, i guess im not droppin with the best of them this week ^Eh. Could have been worded better. fli's gon die quick here in the present this flight's more doomed than those on september 11th ^Not that great. peeps sometimes get stuck, n it aint fun to grind writers block is like your good lines - nothin comes to mind ^No. i snap my fingers n his girl comes runnin, im hittin it slower shes like a tape deck.. one click 'n im flippin her over ^Haha. Pretty decent. f's name is ironic, n this shouldnt check as a shock ima call him flight of stairs.. cos im walkin all over him to get to the top ^Liked this alot too. fuck this bitch, get real, nobody's callin' you the best cause the last few weeks all you did was prove you can DROP with those heads ^Alright, read the mag, they're cheering for me, but i'll let you in on the fun i'll have everyone screamin "FORRR!"... they know i'm about to shoot a hole in one ^Fucking SICK line. fuck this piece of shit, he gets walked on more than floor mats i thought he was an editor... everyboyds sayin' 'where's the decent form,at?' ^An alright punch. Wording could have been better. see i'm a pimp, a playa... while form has nothing but weak lines i got a cam show from his girl last night... then she turned him down in real life ^Ehhhh. Alright, I guess, so fuck you, your punches... mine are harder, bigger and greater cause the truth is i've seen better form... from retarded figure skaters ^Lol. I don't know about this one. It was an alright battle, I guess. I wasn't really feeling Format's verse that much. Alot of the punches were just lame and not hard hitting at all. But you had a couple alright punches but not enough to put you ahead of Flight. Flight, your verse was pretty good. A few off punches. But nothing too horrible. I'm giving this to Flight. He really stepped ahead of Format with that second bar. V/Flight. |
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06-28-08, 01:17 PM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 306E C16B
it sucks im facin this wack fuck bitch geek
well lay, i guess im not droppin with the best of them this week NICE fli's gon die quick here in the present this flight's more doomed than those on september 11th OKISH peeps sometimes get stuck, n it aint fun to grind writers block is like your good lines - nothin comes to mind DOPE f's name is ironic, n this shouldnt check as a shock ima call him flight of stairs.. cos im walkin all over him to get to the top EHHH OK VS fuck this bitch, get real, nobody's callin' you the best cause the last few weeks all you did was prove you can DROP with those heads NICE read the mag, they're cheering for me, but i'll let you in on the fun i'll have everyone screamin "FORRR!"... they know i'm about to shoot a hole in one OKISH fuck this piece of shit, he gets walked on more than floor mats i thought he was an editor... everyboyds sayin' 'where's the decent form,at?' OKISH so fuck you, your punches... mine are harder, bigger and greater cause the truth is i've seen better form... from retarded figure skaters OK V/ FORMAT...HE HAD THE BETTER VERSE
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06-28-08, 03:11 PM | #9 | |||||||
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IP: D088 20AB
Format
it sucks im facin this wack fuck bitch geek well lay, i guess im not droppin with the best of them this week Whack, easy and weak punch. fli's gon die quick here in the present this flight's more doomed than those on september 11th Just 'cause his name is Flight doesn't mean you should used played out concepts. peeps sometimes get stuck, n it aint fun to grind writers block is like your good lines - nothin comes to mind No good. i snap my fingers n his girl comes runnin, im hittin it slower shes like a tape deck.. one click 'n im flippin her over It's a good concept, but not really a hard hitting line. f's name is ironic, n this shouldnt check as a shock ima call him flight of stairs.. cos im walkin all over him to get to the top The concept was good but it was way to forced. Vs. Flight fuck this bitch, get real, nobody's callin' you the best cause the last few weeks all you did was prove you can DROP with those heads Not bad. read the mag, they're cheering for me, but i'll let you in on the fun i'll have everyone screamin "FORRR!"... they know i'm about to shoot a hole in one Sick wordplay, nice punch. fuck this piece of shit, he gets walked on more than floor mats i thought he was an editor... everyboyds sayin' 'where's the decent form,at?' Good concept, seemed a little forced. see i'm a pimp, a playa... while form has nothing but weak lines i got a cam show from his girl last night... then she turned him down in real life Nah so fuck you, your punches... mine are harder, bigger and greater cause the truth is i've seen better form... from retarded figure skaters Hahahaha, I laughed, good punch. This wasn't close at all, it was pretty one sided. Played out concepts and bad wording Vs. Fresh ideas and well worded punches. Vote: Fresh ideas and well worded punches. I mean Flight |
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06-28-08, 10:43 PM | #10 | |||||
The story goes. Bill, B.
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IP: 59DF E5E2
Throwin a vote in this.
Format it sucks im facin this wack fuck bitch geek well lay, i guess im not droppin with the best of them this week Meh. fli's gon die quick here in the present this flight's more doomed than those on september 11th Wording is weird but the thought was decent. peeps sometimes get stuck, n it aint fun to grind writers block is like your good lines - nothin comes to mind Nice. Gettin better. i snap my fingers n his girl comes runnin, im hittin it slower shes like a tape deck.. one click 'n im flippin her over Okay. Not bad f's name is ironic, n this shouldnt check as a shock ima call him flight of stairs.. cos im walkin all over him to get to the top Nice close. It hit and was personal. Flight fuck this bitch, get real, nobody's callin' you the best cause the last few weeks all you did was prove you can DROP with those heads Meh start. read the mag, they're cheering for me, but i'll let you in on the fun i'll have everyone screamin "FORRR!"... they know i'm about to shoot a hole in one Once again, meh. fuck this piece of shit, he gets walked on more than floor mats i thought he was an editor... everyboyds sayin' 'where's the decent form,at?' Ha. Clever. see i'm a pimp, a playa... while form has nothing but weak lines i got a cam show from his girl last night... then she turned him down in real life Okay. so fuck you, your punches... mine are harder, bigger and greater cause the truth is i've seen better form... from retarded figure skaters Bad close. OVERALL: I gotta give it to Format. Though Flight's verse was a little easier to read, the content read was better on Format. The battle was very close, but the big close from Format put him ovet the top in my eyes. For both battlers flow and form could use mose work, that wouldn't fly against the better ups in the league. Decent, enjoyable battle from both and I look forward to more. VOTE: Format
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06-30-08, 05:26 AM | #11 | |||||
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IP: EBB4 6039
Format wins 3 votes to 2.
Format ( 4 ) and Flight ( 2 )
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