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Old 01-01-06, 07:14 PM   #1
chip
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i've been sittin quiet a minute somethin botherin me,
why the same niggaz that hate goin' be bitin my free's,
then tell they friends that they nicer than me,
and on the low slide me a 20 like "who's a better writer than C?",
it's annoying givin props to lames cuz they got names,
just so i can try get signed so i could do the same,
then a thought, why the fuck don't i write what i spit,
instead of gettin pissed when i'm sellin my shit,
and i'm sellin myself short, i know that i'm better
than most of these cats out, so i write em a letter,
"dear lames, i'm bout to sign myself, i never shoulda trust u,
so i'ma chuck u", signed, the ghostwriter, fuck u......
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Old 01-01-06, 08:26 PM   #2
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I liked this little piece, it was nice, I thought the flow was really nice. Vocab is aight.

"dear lames, i'm bout to sign myself, i never shoulda trust u,
so i'ma chuck u", signed, the ghostwriter, fuck u......

^^^Loved that shit right there, that was hot. Keep it up man and if u wanna see something better done by me instead of the "tion(shun)" one, look at Runnin' if u want (its in my sig). Peace.
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