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02-11-04, 07:07 PM
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[Wk2]Diverse vs Bare Knuckles
IP: A9A7 727D
Verses Due: Wednesday, February 18th, 2004
Voting Ends: Friday, February 20th, 2004 Topic: All Or None
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02-12-04, 02:28 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 3732 BEA4
Ready.
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02-12-04, 04:44 AM
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Anti Drug=Pre-marital Sex
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IP: 2F46 BF0E
ready as well...
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02-15-04, 09:30 AM
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IP: 0932 DBC9
I take a seat by the window, the table is covered with the dinner set,
As I strike up the last match from the box to light my cigarette. It exhales a puff of smoke, the ash glows red with a slender flame, While outside the rain gently runs its fingers over the windowpane. I wrap my mouth around the filter and inhale a draw of sweet nicotine, The smoke floods my veins momentarily, making me shake in my seat. I take another draw, my mouth grows dry and I’m too stressed to speak, So I watch the ash fall into the tray, as I think about my memories. It was a time back in ’85, damn, those were shady times, Every night my house would be full of drugs and a baby’s cries. They were my little brother’s, his situation left me deadened, Cause he spent the most important years of his life being neglected. Honestly, If I wasn’t around, my dad would’ve slaughtered him, And I remember staying by his bed to protect him from my father’s fists. He was only 3 years old! He was just too young to face the music, He was too young to understand his face full of fresh bruises. But if that wasn’t enough, you made my life a living hell too, Always making me scream in pain, or the time that you… …Burst into my room with a packet of cigarettes in your hand, Screaming at me, “Take these now, you better do it, I’m your dad”. Then you pushed me to the floor, pressing your boot in my back, And began punching me till I smoked every last one in the pack. It was you who made me an addict, and you thought it was banter, But I hope your happy now at the fact that you gave me cancer. I knew you had it too, I heard your hocking cough at night, But that was no excuse to give me the disease and ruin my life. Look father, I tried to love you, having a happy home was my only wish, And I even tried to forgive and forget all of those things you did. But I could never forget all the hatred you contained in your words, Cause I swear on my life I gave you my all, yet I got none in return. The only thing you gave me was an addiction that makes my skin crawl, A habit I can’t kick, a habit that brings me closer to death with each draw. And even though I’m glad you died from that cancer in your chest, I don’t want to live my life like yours or even follow in your footsteps… So I quit.
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02-18-04, 03:13 AM
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Anti Drug=Pre-marital Sex
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IP: 2F46 BF0E
"Tasha, I love you," he said, as tears trickeled down his face
"But love doesn't change your actions, or this time and place. You've hit your dead end, our relationship definitely stops here" Emotion filled the room as this woman cried out with fear His hand was quivering as he carefully tried to steady his gun "I love you so much baby but it can only be all or none." [Earlier that evening] (thinking inside his head) My girl will really love me when I suprise her with these gifts Tell her that she's beautiful and give her forehead a kiss Just a couple minutes more and I'll be arriving at our house Hopefully I'll catch her off guard, I'll have to be quiet as a mouse She's the only one who makes me realize, love's an amazing thing And soon we'll be in perfect unison forever, symbolized by this ring [Pulls up to the house, sneaks inside to suprise his wife but hears noises] "Oh god Jeff I love it when we finally get some time alone But we need to finish up because soon my husband will be home It's so hard to stop though, my whole body's consumed with lust Give me just a few more days and I promise I'll tell him about us" [Bobby hits the door open wide] "No need to wait you backstabbing whore because I already know The girl I dedicated my entire life to, is sneaking around like a hoe With my best friend Jeff nontheless? There's no room for forgiving Any words to say Jeff, because these are your last moments of living" "Please don't do this! I never meant you any harm, were best friends" A gunshot rang out and Bobby said "This is where it has to end." [Bobby points the gun toward Tasha] "Tasha how could you be so damn cold and shatter my heart? You may as well of just buried me and scattered all the parts We belonged to each other you were my one and only lover Until I walked through the door and found you in the arms of another" "Tasha I love you," he said, as tears trickeled down his face But love doesn't change your actions, or this time and place.........
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