close this little peace of shit.
haha.

even if my verse was ass. haha

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iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

Voted For: _LM_

Yung easily took this. Your verse wasn't all that great but i guess the headache had a part in it. I felt you were moreconsistent with the punches and liked how you played on his records. Favorite line was the daisy herb weed line. Flow I can see you gave it effort which i respect i liked your closer better than Yungs but sadly it was your only good line. Try to keep your rhymes in a 2 line per bar structure instead of 3 lines per bar like you started with.

Good effort to both keep elevating.

V/Yung

PS Vote or leave feedback on my battle it would be appreciated

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