Voted For: Young Kidd (LM)

Me? I'm Like Forest Fires. I Damage and Blaze.
And You? Couldn't be sick With CANCER and AIDS!
preety decent start...
At the End I'm Bomb Vets For Days...
You Resemble My Intro. Cuz KONCEPTZ is PLAYED!
*Stop*
LOL NICE FLIP ON YA OWN INTRO....
In The Middle Of keys I Take A Break And Breathe...
Then Break His Knees...
One Word Uttered And THis Fucker Taste Disease...
eeh punch aint really connect but flow was on point...
On I Dime I Lurch With Power Six Times This Jerks...
Your Rhymes are Heard?...
Like Bad Weed. You The Worst Kind Of Herb...
aight punch weak set up...
Break Ya Name Apart And Drop Liquid...
My Bombs Vicious...Ya Still Alive CEPT You Left..
It critical KONdition...
decent...
But Really I'm Playing Around Put The Hate in The Ground..
You Like Bitches In My Room...
I'm Quick To Start Laying You Down...
aight...
But You KNow What?
The Positions Different Snitch..
So Don't Get Ya Hopes Up!
Get Ya Flow Up...Your A Joke Slut...
You Broke Fuck...You Aint Mad
Cuz When You Pissed You Probably Go On Ya Own Nuts...
preety streched.. and played concept...
Can't Catch The Flow...Then Slow It Down...
Read It Again...Here Let Me Show You How...
Matter Of Fact You Hate..
You Know Mines THe Illest To Say...
YOu? The Reason They Make A Roadsign..
eeh could of had a better ending... but it was aight...

not bad from my first read off you.. keep droping you aight fam.... i see potential.....






the kid may be "young", but usin dat word in yur emcee name is common and "old"/
i wont pay the "price" for battlin yu, coz yur "cheap" and already "sold"/
aight start...
see im bilingual, speakin english and the rap language/
my lines are above "mean", while yurs is still "average"/
eeeh... if worded better would of hit harder..
you aint "cool" nw, bt yu wil be, afta the battle you'l become my "fan"/
i stil beat y0o ass in a battle wether yur a "young kidd" or a man/
aight...
i be thnkn of schemes and ideas, thats y they call me konceptz/
yu could ride "elevators" all day and still make no progress/
aight.,..
now look, i can tell yur scared and shook/
by readin ya name i can tell yur a ficitional character from a book/
weak...
my raps "smoke" this "fag". this is my win number one/
and imma carry on spittin raps, while yu be spittin out come/
gay ending... should of hit harder here...

i thought you could of did better and i believe you had a chance but you aint step up to the plate keep droping them bars and keep elevateing....


good battle fellas...

but this one go to young kid......

yo RTF of voting in one of my battles or i will have my vote removed....

thanks you have 48 hours...

eh... everyone who was saying stuff aboutmy flow and ish....eh..i havent done text for a while been doing audio forever... so yea..my flow is ..audio-esqe

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Voted For: Young Kidd (LM)

Gotta drop a vote for Young kid.
Great multi's.. like your punchlines

YOu? The Reason They Make A Roadsign..
"Slow Children At Play"

pretty good, wuld have been great audio style. but yee..
Gud stuff,

Konz, all gud, but needa elevate.

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