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Old 06-17-07, 09:36 PM   #1
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Week 2: Apartheid 1-0 .vs Mav. 1-0

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Battles Up Sunday
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Verses Due Friday
Voting Ends Sunday
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Old 06-17-07, 10:03 PM   #2
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Old 06-18-07, 10:00 PM   #3
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Old 06-22-07, 11:36 AM   #4
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listen dude

if you were milk dude,your lowfat,and 1% so awful it hurts
Soy and interms of Grades
............................I guess you didnt give any work
we all know your wack shit,so listen you need some practice
but your good enuff to be in the HoF,for wackness
I knew it dude,with wackness will you Everest, to get a win
But still ill help upp your rec
.......................and have you a-mountain to nothin
ill steal your bitch,and I guess Ill give you crap calls
if you swing dope
..................we know his weed stack falls
you queer kid and on the fareal bitch,gay as fuck so a queer im cookin
and we know you'll like this loss
.................................cuz you think highly of ass whoppins
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Old 06-22-07, 06:02 PM   #5
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you paint the picture to biting, son ya fagget rhymes aint hittin me
last week we saw what this Nancy Drew....and it looked like Mystery
funny thing is i can write completely wack, my punches wont be your defeat
because the highlight of this battle, is you being BOOTED FROM THE LEAGUE!
yeah its true stubbs said it, so wtf? why make me read your shitty verse
because this week your
...............................shit
......................................is droppin
..............................................more
...............................................tha n the
.................................................f ormat of your verse

so wtf please stop, go back to an ezboard with ya cow rhymes geez

so im milk now? well consider yourself the rotted curded version...cottage cheese
yeah that was even GAY, ill probably get a few "OMFG THAT WAS GAY VOTES"
but i guess that'll be better a.


My Verse


vs.


Nothing quote
fuckin hoax, you cook queers? gtfo who the fuck u think u testing
everyone know Maven a Bodslam, and they dont even watch wrestling


blah rofl nuff to beat u.
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Old 06-22-07, 09:38 PM   #6
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Mav. You have been suspended from this league.

However, the decision of you being booted. Is not yet determined
I actually haven't seen that line myself, and even though feeble
agreed that the line was in fact bitten. I STILL need a link.

Now,

To the members of this league. I am working on resolving this matter. If you happen to know link. Please pm me.

Unfortunately for Apartheid, Mav. is not booted yet. So this battle is good. Both battlers have dropped, and this is battle is ready for votes...





So, with all that said.



Apartheid

you paint the picture to biting, son ya fagget rhymes aint hittin me
last week we saw what this Nancy Drew....and it looked like Mystery

I thought this line was good at first. Cuz i thought you were referring
to him biting from mystery. However, the link you put in was to the mag
So that threw me off a lil. none the less. ok wordplay. ok punch


funny thing is i can write completely wack, my punches wont be your defeat
because the highlight of this battle, is you being BOOTED FROM THE LEAGUE!
This was ok. Its actually a bit played though, and the concept in general wasn't really harsh. BUT, i do think you worded it nicely, maybe not as much
in the set up...but the finish line was good.



.vs

Nothin from mav

I think this whole verse, was actually yours. None of it was bitten. Cuz all of it sucked
Terrible wording in everyone of your lines. Your structure needs help bad. Everyones
told you over and over. Quit with all the..................dots! Concepts were simple.
Nothing really effective. Or even close to being ok.


Weak battle. Apart you didn't really come that hard. I felt you were trying to be
a little too cocky. None of your bars were good this week. Just 2 ok quoteables
that simply had potential, but didn't follow through. If mav. would have bit 1 GOOD
line, he would have have won this. Now, i'm not saying i'm with biting, because i think
its fucking wack. Anyone who has to steal someone elses lines/lyrics. Is a herb in my book, and yes Mav. that means i think your a herb. If its true. I actually have yet to
see you deny it. .....Anyways


O yeah, fuck.


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Old 06-23-07, 12:26 AM   #7
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word i keyed in the quick reply.
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Old 06-23-07, 10:46 AM   #8
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you paint the picture to biting, son ya fagget rhymes aint hittin me
last week we saw what this Nancy Drew....and it looked like Mystery
funny thing is i can write completely wack, my punches wont be your defeat
because the highlight of this battle, is you being BOOTED FROM THE LEAGUE!
..first one was decent,..and teh 2nd even though played was a pretty damn good personal wit good wording..

vs..

nothing really.like apar already predicted...

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Old 06-23-07, 03:20 PM   #9
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Fuck you Mav. you fucking queer....stealing my poems my name and let alone biting I should kick your ass!!!! and saying ur me from RB Your a complete faggot!
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Old 06-23-07, 03:20 PM   #10
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But WTF I think hes and admin cuz we have the same IP!?!?!
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Old 06-23-07, 03:32 PM   #11
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i dont know whats going on...

mav problem made a new screen name OMGitsMAV trying to confuse niggas....

but on to the vote:

you paint the picture to biting, son ya fagget rhymes aint hittin me
last week we saw what this Nancy Drew....and it looked like Mystery
funny thing is i can write completely wack, my punches wont be your defeat
because the highlight of this battle, is you being BOOTED FROM THE LEAGUE!

vs

noting good at all.....

you know after i read this verse.... then i thought about the verse you drop agenist me in FRONT LINE.... i notice its similuer cuz they both was garbish..... then i thought... the verse you drop agenist don was the complet oppasit?? and i voted for you in that battle now im realizing you most likely bit it so i think im gonna see if strobe can re-move my vote from that battle or switch it cuz that aint right..... and your sorry ass exscuse for the wach verse u drop agenist me was cuz your brother was messing around with your stuff LMFAO WHAT A LAME!!!!!.......

mav should just get bannd point blank.....


vote: apar by far for being ORIGINAL AND HAVING HES OWN CONCEPTS...
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Old 06-24-07, 05:13 PM   #12
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^^^Im not that Mav. but idk how we have the same IPs
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Old 06-24-07, 07:15 PM   #13
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Apartheid wins 2-0

Mav. loses and suspended.
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