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Old 09-08-05, 07:03 PM   #1
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my final words to : atticus

IP: 10E1 4D65

Lame..ya sleepin' on criminal, now get smothered
ya text game?...fuckin' ugly like ya only mother
since u was ye high, criminal' dudes been merkin u
when push comes to shove that hoe theres the 1st to move
Fuck ya steez, bitch kid..look how ya knees quiver Jayce
smack the taste..outcha mouth, now he got bitter beer face
the bloodbath has begun. atticus swims in red lakes
nothing can save you. Not even prayer from T.D. Jakes
cord clutched in my mouth while the mic dangles freely
you bitches piss blood monthly, sometimes even weekly
when you see me....I splat heads from under their beenies
in that ass like thong or g-strings, underwear or bikinis
this rhyme is mad wack and directed at absolutely no one
but I'm still ill. Spit in your face and make your nose run
what?........ dont act like i never,
use to father atticus on the daily, a beating more of a abuse this-kid-gets
Now I got a court order to pay up cause his moms lost her Wic check...
Who I'ma have to rip next....I mastered the flip text...
and got a custom 2' piss'in on everything this bitch rep....

dont try to disrespect me ya herd
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Old 09-08-05, 08:25 PM   #2
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You're Officially "That Kid" Now
... Congradulations

Mmmm, Why Not Im Bord
... Keep Your Eyes Open For The Return

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Old 09-08-05, 08:28 PM   #3
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since u called your own rhymes "mad wack" i guess i don't have to get too descriptive. kinda new, so i don't know who Atticus iz...... structure was off, but it actually seemed to flow okay......... probably should have been in the Diss part of this forum....... up your vocab and fix your structure, but other than that, a solid piece.......
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