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09-08-05, 07:03 PM | #1 | ||||||
Banned: Biting
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my final words to : atticus
IP: 10E1 4D65
Lame..ya sleepin' on criminal, now get smothered
ya text game?...fuckin' ugly like ya only mother since u was ye high, criminal' dudes been merkin u when push comes to shove that hoe theres the 1st to move Fuck ya steez, bitch kid..look how ya knees quiver Jayce smack the taste..outcha mouth, now he got bitter beer face the bloodbath has begun. atticus swims in red lakes nothing can save you. Not even prayer from T.D. Jakes cord clutched in my mouth while the mic dangles freely you bitches piss blood monthly, sometimes even weekly when you see me....I splat heads from under their beenies in that ass like thong or g-strings, underwear or bikinis this rhyme is mad wack and directed at absolutely no one but I'm still ill. Spit in your face and make your nose run what?........ dont act like i never, use to father atticus on the daily, a beating more of a abuse this-kid-gets Now I got a court order to pay up cause his moms lost her Wic check... Who I'ma have to rip next....I mastered the flip text... and got a custom 2' piss'in on everything this bitch rep.... dont try to disrespect me ya herd |
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09-08-05, 08:25 PM | #2 | |||
1926
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IP: 0825 899A
You're Officially "That Kid" Now
... Congradulations Mmmm, Why Not Im Bord ... Keep Your Eyes Open For The Return |
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09-08-05, 08:28 PM | #3 | ||||
her one-man army
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IP: EE58 AEAE
since u called your own rhymes "mad wack" i guess i don't have to get too descriptive. kinda new, so i don't know who Atticus iz...... structure was off, but it actually seemed to flow okay......... probably should have been in the Diss part of this forum....... up your vocab and fix your structure, but other than that, a solid piece.......
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